Item: What's A King Without A System?
Rating: 2.6

siltas1Lv54yr

2020-03-07 11:30

Very weird story progression. Firstly, the "extra" contained vital info that would make the book ten times more confusing without. Additionally, the book is all over the place. It's just confusing when there is no explanation where you are, when the MC can see the future etc.. All the author has to do is put time and location stamps everytime a scene swaps. Then there is the random focus on side characters; honestly, it's hard to tell what's going on most of the time when the story is so choppy. Yes, character building is fine. However, in the middle of character building, I also have to go through the author acting mysterious about the two characters that are being developed? Finally, the stupid smile the MC has. I've never encountered a book that made me hate a MC smiling. The emphasis on it gets really annoying(its truly obnoxious.)

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