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2019-09-25 00:52

Until now I have enjoyed the progress of the story, and I really liked how the AI was introduced in the Prologue. I hope it has a higher impact as we go along than until now. There are some small writing mistakes which can easily be corrected with a spell check but what bothered me the most was the fact that the tenses used seem to be out of order which somehow does not let me immerse in the story. It might be just me though. In some situations, I feel that talking at past tense would make more sense than forcing the present. Nevertheless, the characters are endearing and I'm rooting for James and Eric and I hope they will be able to keep themselves safe while taking revenge. Keep going and hope to see more as the story progresses.

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