Since I've finished my first volume.. I'll review again. The second book is omegaverse story. People having a second gender like alpha, beta and omega.

Until now I have enjoyed the progress of the story, and I really liked how the AI was introduced in the Prologue. I hope it has a higher impact as we go along than until now. There are some small writing mistakes which can easily be corrected with a spell check but what bothered me the most was the fact that the tenses used seem to be out of order which somehow does not let me immerse in the story. It might be just me though. In some situations, I feel that talking at past tense would make more sense than forcing the present. Nevertheless, the characters are endearing and I'm rooting for James and Eric and I hope they will be able to keep themselves safe while taking revenge. Keep going and hope to see more as the story progresses.

Reveal spoiler

It's an interesting story that deals with the problem of an A.I. and it's tendency to hurt us for the sake of self-preservation. At least, that's how the first chapter went. So far, the story is well paced with good characters and an interesting world that's being built by the author. There are a few grammatical errors but that's fine as it doesn't bresk the flow at all. Keep up the good work, author!

Its a good story so far.

I don't usually read something like this book, but I do find it interesting. The writing quality is good. There is some grammatical and spelling error, but as someone who doesn't mind much about it, it doesn't ruin the reading experience much. The story plot and the characters are fascinating. There's a bit of sci-fi and revenge plot. I'm looking forward to seeing the romance part. There seem to be something brewing, and I'm eager to find out what is it. As for now, I

The story had some grammatical error but the overall is quite nice. The plot line is clean and looks promising, and i hope that you will continue this story to better not to worse.

So, after reading through what you have so far, I think you have an interesting kernel of a world going on here, and I'm digging the overall sense of the characters you're creating! Two things I would suggest that would take your writing to the next level- First, show characters doing things and having things happen to them that reveal their character traits and histories, rather than just telling us about them. That makes a story much more engaging! Second, I can tell you are not a native English speaker by how you use verbs. You do not conjugate them, and use the same tense in all uses, which tells me you natively speak a language that doesn't do this with verbs like we do. I know Japanese is like this and I'm sure others are as well. I would read up on how to conjugate English verb tenses, and practice them until they feel natural. That will take your writing from decent to good in a heartbeat! Thanks for writing, friend!

I'll definitely put this book in my library. It do have some grammatical error and a little bit unpolished but the overall is good. The protagonist is not a whelp who needed some help everytime but not to prideful that he can't accept any help at all. Gosh, I hate those novels.