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Review Detail of GloriouslyFamous in Immortals: The Curse of Samsara

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GloriouslyFamous
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An excellent novel. The Author is an exceptional writer, and this story is a piece of art. The story starts off with character building and a suspenseful plot. The beautiful narrative continues on and builds a fascinating world. The most wonderful aspect of the story is that there is always something new with rich descriptions and vivid imagery. There is a sad undertone to the story, but it definitely helps in highlighting the happy occasions making them more real and easy to connect to. Grammar wise it is almost perfect and possibly one of the best works in WN. I think the most wonderful aspect of this novel is the character building. The MC is just wonderful; he is described very well and the backstories bring life to him making him seem very real. Not only is the MC well described, but so are the side characters. The dialogue between the characters flow smoothly and really highlight their personalities. Reading the story will make you feel that you have been introduced to a diverse cast of characters. Overall, it is a wonderful read and a definite recommendation, the authors, including me, can definitely learn from the meticulous writing and the readers can have a wonderful experience reading this piece of work. Recommendations - for the auxiliary chapter in clarification and explanation, I think you should add "(possible spoilers)" to the title as some extra information is revealed there. My personal opinion is not to leave the great side chapters in the auxiliary section but to add them to the story and just title them side chapter/ side stories. And, of course, it is added to my library to finish reading!

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Immortals: The Curse of Samsara

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Ooh, the auxiliary chapters are there for those that wanted more after reading what chapters I released. They're like the side stories added at the end of a volume but I didn't want to add it to the volume chapters since it would break the immersion. Like, say my chapter ends on a cliffhanger, which is often, and then the next chapter isn't a continuation, but a side chapter. I've had a few people complain about that so I moved it to the auxiliary volume. This way, it doesn't break the story and feel like filler while leaving it optional to the readers if they want to know more of the world's background