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hadleeward2005
hadleeward2005Lv15yr
2019-11-25 16:44

It's a really weird but kind of cool story I guess... I like some of the characters but others are weird. But in a good way. It has some cool super powers I guess. Also some monsters. It is a bit of a slow start but I think it is starting to speed up? Maybe?

Enforcers

RainyLiquid2020
4.7
102 Chs

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KIING
KIINGLv14

The synopsis is way too long. Cannot be bothered to read it. You should shorten it. The synopsis is way too long. Cannot be bothered to read it. You should shorten it. The synopsis is way too long. Cannot be bothered to read it. You should shorten it.

4yr

MyMoneymoneymoney
MyMoneymoneymoneyLv1

I feel so weird writing this review because I wanted to like this story. And part of me does like it. But I also f##king hate it lol. Okay let's start off with this. The Arthur isn't really a bad writer. He set up the world really well and it was easy to follow. Killer monsters, people with powers fights them, good guys are Enforcers. Easy. The first half of Volume One is Good. Really good. At least a3.5 or 4 out of 5. And then you get to the rest... So first off. A compliant. It's f##king long. The first half of volume one is good but so stupidly long. The first chapter is nearly 5000 words. F##k. And it gets longer... Also you can tell it's his first story and the writing is meh. That gets better. But the story gets worse. Volume Two is f##ked. Kind of. The final part of volume one, and the first half of volume two feel mega rushed. I feel like he just made s##t up that he thought would be cool. Thankfully the second half of Volume Two was good. Again. Better than volume one. But I don't want to go through s##t to get a semi valuable diamond. Now Volume 3... What? What even is it? I feel like s##t just happens to happen. The lovable characters are gone there's like 15 plots and its just bad. And spoiler so don't read this part if you care about that it ends on a rebbot? It just ends. Hero dies. Story restarts... Why! That's so stupid and so dumb. I hate it. Legit hate it. Not good at all. So Volume 3 has ended and the Arthur has rebooted the entire story. Volume 4 is volume one again but with some changes. And.. It's good. I mean it's a f##king stupid plot point and a mess to get to it, the Volume so far is the best. It as the easy and fun story of Volume One, with the improved writing. It really feels like its own story and not a part of Enforcers? But still Enforcers? Its weird. I'm gonna keep reading because I know the story is good. It just bad also? It's so weird? The comments are a meme and is just off I guess? So heres what I say. Read Volume one, skip 2, and 3, and go straight to 4. By the end of Volume one you'll know if you enjoy these characters or not.

4yr
RainyLiquid2020
RainyLiquid2020Author

Why am I allowed to rate my own story? Of course, I'm gonna be a biased prick and give myself all fives? Screw fair play! I'm in this for the long run! Here's a 1

5yr
stormfalcon13
stormfalcon13Lv3

five out of five simply for having the shortest first chapter and somehow still managing to make a serious story lol. Okay but for real. I'd actually give this like a 3 or maybe a low 4. It is a kind of funny story. It uses dark horse styles of comedy with people mostly making short quick replies so if you don't like that you probroaly wont find this story funny. As for action. it has its moments. I feel like they could be a lot better but it gets the point across. The story is kind of cool. You got monsters and superpowers. It is really slow though. I was expecting this to be like a few chapters of world building but we're still only at chapter 20 and are still be givin questions. Some stuff still hasn't been explained and others are slowly being unraveled. The powers are kind of cool. They take normal concepts and alter them kind of. Like you got your base fire power and this mad man said screw it and turned it into a fox. I like Chinese lore and mythology. All in all this is an okayish story. I have fun reading it but then again I've never given any rank lower than a 3 so don't trust me.

5yr
Pieperson2001
Pieperson2001Lv3

I will be 100% honest. I didn't really like it early on. But. The more I read it the more I found myself starting to like it? The charcaters grew on me, and the story seemed to get better for me. The superpowers are basic but with a uquie spin on them, or at least what I think is a cool spin... Jackson is by far my favorite character. He is super goofy but has been shown the be really powerful. Like stupidly powerful. The only main problome I even have is Irene... The way they were handled felt weird to me but I think I got what the author is going for? Anyways the point I am getting at is that this story is really over the top and weird. And I like that. I read so many deep and dark stories that I thought it was refreshing to have a story where they make jokes. #Hero X Ken for life.

5yr
Jackele523
Jackele523Lv2

It's an okay story. It starts off kind of crap but then again every webnovel I've read has started off the same way. I'll give it a 3 so far since it does seem to be sort of getting better. Right now though there are definitely better stories to read.

5yr
Snidog752
Snidog752Lv3

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GunnySniper
GunnySniperLv2

It is an okay story for sure. It is still super early on but every chapter seems to get better. I didn't have a moment that I hated, but I did have several that I found enjoyable. Honestly I feel like you either like it or you don't?

5yr
RobertJohn2000
RobertJohn2000Lv2

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5yr
mousehider1991
mousehider1991Lv2

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