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KnIvialDanial0002
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2019-12-02 17:43

Okay. Here is an honest review of what I think of the story so far. As of right now there are 28 chapters so anything in the comment may not be true anymore. Also I won't spoil anything. So. First of all what do I think of the story. It is a good story. And I mean that. It has an interesting idea, and has some really (at least to me) cool super powers, and monsters. It has some interesting character that I do hope to see expanded on. While I do feel some can do better I personally don't hate any of them. Secondly. The grammar is good, but in terms of that I am heavily biased. I have been reading so many stories that have so many mistakes that after reading this one it was refreshing. Now it does mess up so it is by no means perfect. Hell it does have a few mistakes in writing now that I think back on it but compared to some of the other 'stories' I have read a few mistakes are things I can forgive. Now for what is the biggest problem I have with this story. The length of it... This story is a massive slow burn! It takes like 20 chapters before the plot starts working... Now usually I wouldn't mind that but the chapters are so God Damn long... Like stupidly long... There's a point where there are 5 chapters all with at least 5k words in a row!!! Now look. I do like long chapters, but damn! Now if you like long chapters than you'll like it. Now I will say it does seem to be speeding up? Maybe? I dunno. The plot seems to be moving now which is good... But seriously I hope those chapters start to get shorter considering the fact that with the massive chapters and the slow burn plot it can be annoying. Thankfully I do like the characters, and there are some funny jokes that keep me in. So all in all if you have time go ahead and read this. But be warned as it will take time to finish this one...

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RainyLiquid2020
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Thank you. :) And yeah I have been told the stories are kind of to big lol. Don't worry furuture ones won't be so big.

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