* My native language is not English, I am just using "GOOGLE TRANSLATOR" *
* {I'm going to chapter 15, but I couldn't bear to continue reading, such SHIT} *
This story has a lot of errors and inconsistencies, I honestly don't understand why it has "4.6 stars", (I'm going to make it clear that I'm halfway through the hunterxhunter arc, but I can't stand it anymore the character is **** and not normal **** a FUCK !!!!) if I start writing the errors I will reach the limit of characters, for which I will only say some.
-COVER PICTURE: Let's be honest that image that has the cover of the book is FUCK.
-SYSTEM AND WISHES (in the hunterxhunter arc he has only made a wish, what outrages me is the use he makes of the system, being able to buy OP skills, buy bloodlines that give him cooking skills ... it's a SHIT): no I am against saving wishes, which is actually very good, but it pisses me off that it doesn't use the system, it only uses it to see its state (which doesn't make sense, for two things; first it has a value of VERY high luck compared to an average person and even so it is the friends [Leorio] who handle the girls, and second because the values increase in a very proportional way [100 -> 300] which is illogical, being able to buy skills which in a world like hunterxhunter would be very OP, an example would be the ROKUSHIKI of the one piece world.
-TRAMA: it shows too much that the author got the fanfiction from between the ass, because the plot is ****, I am reading the part of the hunterxhunter arc where Leorio gropes the girl psychologist, murderer and still does not mention the sister of the MC (which should be the same sister of Killua), in addition the author makes the MC follow the plot of the story, being able to have used the knowledge of the plot to make the story more interesting, for example he could have trained NEN with Wing (free), but the MC pushed him away and ignored him when he was just trying to get closer, which is stupid the MC could have treated him well and made friends with him (it's better to have friends than enemies), I'm not trying to say that he became Wing's "girlfriend", only he could have been a friendly acquaintance.
- CHARACTERS: the author does not know how to create characters and take them through the story, an example is killua, to which the MC transmitted his mental deficiencies.