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FvkYouBoy
FvkYouBoyLv45yr
2019-11-23 09:40

This is worst and irritating fanfic to read with an annoying mc.. This is really surprising that lot of people voted on this crap. Author wants other mc to get stronger than his mc so he will let his mc train the original mc and then in just a short time the original mc is already stronger than him?? THATS STTUPIIDDDD. GO TO HELL MOTHERFVKER!

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southgamez
southgamezAuthor

XD thanks bro your The first 1 star. If you dont like it piss off

FvkYouBoy
FvkYouBoyLv4

Say ah. So I can piss on your mouth

southgamez:XD thanks bro your The first 1 star. If you dont like it piss off
southgamez
southgamezAuthor

Ahhhhhh

FvkYouBoy:Say ah. So I can piss on your mouth
FvkYouBoy
FvkYouBoyLv4

I dunno but im getting hard

southgamez:Ahhhhhh
southgamez
southgamezAuthor

Dumb cunt. xD go tiddle your wanker and rant and rave else where. People like you are small in number compared to the amount of people who actually like my book

FvkYouBoy:Say ah. So I can piss on your mouth
southgamez
southgamezAuthor

Get hard else where

FvkYouBoy:I dunno but im getting hard
FvkYouBoy
FvkYouBoyLv4

LOL

southgamez:Dumb cunt. xD go tiddle your wanker and rant and rave else where. People like you are small in number compared to the amount of people who actually like my book
southgamez
southgamezAuthor

Good I still make people laugh but i have to leave you here. I happen to be a contributing member too society and have a job good night Mr. Rude guy

FvkYouBoy:LOL
Kiikuro_Shichigo
Kiikuro_ShichigoLv4

Peace out!

southgamez:Good I still make people laugh but i have to leave you here. I happen to be a contributing member too society and have a job good night Mr. Rude guy
southgamez
southgamezAuthor

This stupid review dropped me all of .1 stars

Kiikuro_Shichigo:Peace out!
Kiikuro_Shichigo
Kiikuro_ShichigoLv4

Nah, I support you man.

southgamez:This stupid review dropped me all of .1 stars
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* My native language is not English, I am just using "GOOGLE TRANSLATOR" * * {I'm going to chapter 15, but I couldn't bear to continue reading, such SHIT} * This story has a lot of errors and inconsistencies, I honestly don't understand why it has "4.6 stars", (I'm going to make it clear that I'm halfway through the hunterxhunter arc, but I can't stand it anymore the character is **** and not normal **** a FUCK !!!!) if I start writing the errors I will reach the limit of characters, for which I will only say some. -COVER PICTURE: Let's be honest that image that has the cover of the book is FUCK. -SYSTEM AND WISHES (in the hunterxhunter arc he has only made a wish, what outrages me is the use he makes of the system, being able to buy OP skills, buy bloodlines that give him cooking skills ... it's a SHIT): no I am against saving wishes, which is actually very good, but it pisses me off that it doesn't use the system, it only uses it to see its state (which doesn't make sense, for two things; first it has a value of VERY high luck compared to an average person and even so it is the friends [Leorio] who handle the girls, and second because the values ​​increase in a very proportional way [100 -> 300] which is illogical, being able to buy skills which in a world like hunterxhunter would be very OP, an example would be the ROKUSHIKI of the one piece world. -TRAMA: it shows too much that the author got the fanfiction from between the ass, because the plot is ****, I am reading the part of the hunterxhunter arc where Leorio gropes the girl psychologist, murderer and still does not mention the sister of the MC (which should be the same sister of Killua), in addition the author makes the MC follow the plot of the story, being able to have used the knowledge of the plot to make the story more interesting, for example he could have trained NEN with Wing (free), but the MC pushed him away and ignored him when he was just trying to get closer, which is stupid the MC could have treated him well and made friends with him (it's better to have friends than enemies), I'm not trying to say that he became Wing's "girlfriend", only he could have been a friendly acquaintance. - CHARACTERS: the author does not know how to create characters and take them through the story, an example is killua, to which the MC transmitted his mental deficiencies.

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