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Astral_EthicsLv64yr
2020-11-25 07:00

This was a great idea for a story just badly implemented, there is hardly any good buildup in background or character growth feels kinda boring with no background, nothing done outside of the game in "RL". The Game doesn't really have any game elements as far as ive read. The Mc just finds everything and suddenly creates things out of nowhere. It's kinda like Mc is a wannabe Dr.Stone or whatever. overall it's just meh.

Project Overworld

Cinerath
4.3
136 Chs

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Cinerath
CinerathAuthor

Hello, Author of Project Overworld here! Just to let you all know that this story is currently indefinitely paused (I got myself a job and I'm only doing some writing in my free time now). I haven't brought myself to set the state of this story into "Completed" yet since I feel like the ending is a bit rushed and there are some ideas worth investigating for a potential sequel. In any case, I had a wonderful time writing and releasing this novel on this website, so much so that writing became one of my favorite hobbies out there. I hope you all will enjoy reading Project Overworld if you are new to it, or other wonderful stories if you've already reached the ending point of my novel!

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Ethan132
Ethan132Lv14

I’m honestly so surprised o didn’t know this gem of a book existed until today. It’s literally everything I’m looking for and more and I’m so exited to see how the mc is going to develop. Thank you so much author for blessing us with such a great novel :)

5yr
Fortunis
FortunisLv15

I'm just gonna lay this out here. The MC goes from making flint spears to black powder rifles in hours. Then becomes a slave. Then leaves. Then goes back to help the people that enslaved him. Seriously. Its like the author added every damn random thought he had to the story. He's inventing rockets and, I **** you not, takes a boat half way around the planet to introduce fucking paintball to the virtual worlds version of a tech fair. This is a guy who's apparently invented A.I. in the game world by the way. I'm so done with this **** show mash up of a story.

4yr
PyroButt
PyroButtLv15

So far this books is of amazing quality. it's interesting and unique in a way, while keeping your attention with every passing chapter. overall it is one of the few books worth a second read or maybe even a third when it gets higher in chapters which is it's only weak point, the update schedule is a little slow. This is of course counteracted by the great chapters with great length, but overall its current read time is less than 2 hours. still good one, author 10/10

4yr
aslan501
aslan501Lv13

It's a good book

5yr
FunnyBarry200
FunnyBarry200Lv5

A decent book, but with somewhat iffy uploading schedule. Its hard to find good novels on this site and this is one of them, with decent enough of a plot, realistic ish development, and somewhat far reaching actions this book if it had more support and chapters, is a wonderfull addition to my digital library.

4yr
TheFreeZe
TheFreeZeLv11

This novel is a hidden gem. Im totally hyped up now xD Dont really know what to write here, just read the first 40 chapters and decide for yourself xD

4yr
kyuu3
kyuu3Lv13

Nonsensical "realistic" crafting where one guy can make few guns and cannons in few days without any experience. Good idea for a story, terrible execution.

4yr
Mithren
MithrenLv13

The idea behind this story is good and I'm of the opinion that if the author keeps with the story to completion then they will have a fantastic first draft. That said the author tells the readers what's happening rather showing. This doesn't allow the reader to deeply immerse themselves in the story. I think this also contributes to the pacing problems of the story. Over all if you don't mind that this is a fledgling author then I believe this to be a promising story and hope the author will continue writing it.

4yr
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