I'm just gonna lay this out here. The MC goes from making flint spears to black powder rifles in hours. Then becomes a slave. Then leaves. Then goes back to help the people that enslaved him. Seriously. Its like the author added every damn random thought he had to the story. He's inventing rockets and, I **** you not, takes a boat half way around the planet to introduce fucking paintball to the virtual worlds version of a tech fair. This is a guy who's apparently invented A.I. in the game world by the way. I'm so done with this **** show mash up of a story.
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I was reading this review for a while, trying to think of something to say about it. First, I really don't like the word slavery. Keith never got enslaved by any means, although he had to help some people out because of the risk of being attacked in turn. Then, if you read the story more deeply you'll understand it didn't take "hours" for him to develop black powder rifles, but something more in the line of months. I didn't really add every random thoughts in my story, I just tried making it interesting since most of it revolves around crafting anyways. I'm sorry if you felt it that way, and I hope you have an enjoyable time on this platform.
Cmon this is the reason i read this book. Its different from others. Just cause its different doesnt mean that its that bad.
imprisonment for physical or mental labor with the threat of pain or death is the definition of slavery. at a minimum it was coercion.
Cinerath:I was reading this review for a while, trying to think of something to say about it. First, I really don't like the word slavery. Keith never got enslaved by any means, although he had to help some people out because of the risk of being attacked in turn. Then, if you read the story more deeply you'll understand it didn't take "hours" for him to develop black powder rifles, but something more in the line of months. I didn't really add every random thoughts in my story, I just tried making it interesting since most of it revolves around crafting anyways. I'm sorry if you felt it that way, and I hope you have an enjoyable time on this platform.
That is why I said he never was a slave by any means. He was both free physically and mentally, he was just working under a contract requiring him to make some tools for someone else. Also, since this is a game he was free to kill his character and started again from spawn or simply walk out of there while taking a minimum of resources (which he did). He was more or less okay with the contract since he did not choose any of those options.
Fortunis:imprisonment for physical or mental labor with the threat of pain or death is the definition of slavery. at a minimum it was coercion.
what the **** author so being under a threat is not bad? So you fucking let the mc help them? Its okay to me if the mc don't care to them , first this is a survival game not a fucking modern world that should be bound by it hahahahaha Im amused that its peaceful when it should be 'strong eat the weak ' you see author its a game so the humans will not fear jail. Let me tell you you are weak willed to be brainwashed the invironment that says what is good and what is bad when you should be yourself atleast the guys at the upper society live by it . You should not see the society of what is beautiful but what is the truth okay?
Cinerath:That is why I said he never was a slave by any means. He was both free physically and mentally, he was just working under a contract requiring him to make some tools for someone else. Also, since this is a game he was free to kill his character and started again from spawn or simply walk out of there while taking a minimum of resources (which he did). He was more or less okay with the contract since he did not choose any of those options.
Sorry for my bad grammar its not really my main language
GodOfHumanPath:what the **** author so being under a threat is not bad? So you fucking let the mc help them? Its okay to me if the mc don't care to them , first this is a survival game not a fucking modern world that should be bound by it hahahahaha Im amused that its peaceful when it should be 'strong eat the weak ' you see author its a game so the humans will not fear jail. Let me tell you you are weak willed to be brainwashed the invironment that says what is good and what is bad when you should be yourself atleast the guys at the upper society live by it . You should not see the society of what is beautiful but what is the truth okay?
Lol
Cinerath:That is why I said he never was a slave by any means. He was both free physically and mentally, he was just working under a contract requiring him to make some tools for someone else. Also, since this is a game he was free to kill his character and started again from spawn or simply walk out of there while taking a minimum of resources (which he did). He was more or less okay with the contract since he did not choose any of those options.
OOF, toxic review.
maybe but its also accurate.
easyread:OOF, toxic review.
The MC goes from making flint spears to black powder rifles in hours. Yes, but in Realtime hours and this is videogame. Try Age of Empires it's really easy to achieve. Then becomes a slave. That never happened. I have seen your definition of slavery. In this game this is impossible. Character cannot fell pain and cannot die in a way that may be used as threat. Relation beetwen MC ang guild is more like citizen in feudal era. Then goes back to help the people that enslaved him. Only real part of this is about going back. MC goes back to see city build by other players and to made game more attractive to other players. This will help him too by reducing chance of closing game servers. And again this is video game, even better this is simulated universe. You can do anything. Why MC cannot play like he likes?
