Review Detail of BlakkStan in TRAVELLING THROUGH HIS PHONE(DXD to ATG every world)
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I find this story hard to read. There are a bunch of spelling mistakes. You forget to add spaces and you basically make the character's super bland. I hope this helps in your writing. P.S. Stop adding emojis.
TRAVELLING THROUGH HIS PHONE(DXD to ATG every world)
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Don't bother reading this, the first thing mc do is save random couple masaomi, a strong ultimate class power, and cleria onto his inner world which is supposed to be secret. MC doesn't have anything to do with the two but he save them. Then he place all his weak wives onto his inner world. Masaomi and mc's wives interact and chat happily in a daily basis. There's no mechanism whatsoever that control his inner world. Guess the author always wears a green hat.