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Koahla
KoahlaLv145yr
2020-04-05 05:24

Complete wish fulfilment. English is fine, it's readable but with errors, text lingo, etc. Power system and wishes are whack, but those don't matter at all since the MC is broken, and the story is about fantasy fulfilment. MC is hollow and so are the characters. Reads like a script, rather than a story. Not my type of story, but definitely has a reader base that will be interested. Maybe 13 year olds that want some something to store in their spank bank. TL;DR: Don't think while reading and you might be able to read all of it. Not for those looking for quality but some mindless time-pass material.

TRAVELLING THROUGH HIS PHONE(DXD to ATG every world)

White_Luck_1289
4.1
107 Chs

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AraAra
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Cliches and difficult to read because of poor placement and grammar. That's all my opinion in the first to second chapters.

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BlakkStan
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I find this story hard to read. There are a bunch of spelling mistakes. You forget to add spaces and you basically make the character's super bland. I hope this helps in your writing. P.S. Stop adding emojis.

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Assassins_Read
Assassins_ReadLv5

A ****ty self fullfillment story. Nothing seems real and it is too fast paced. Read it if you have time to spare, but I won't recommend it.

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Shallow_vernal
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Deluqui
DeluquiLv4

Thanks for Fan-Fic, your work is great, me and my friends were very excited waiting for the next chapter, don't let it fall..............................................................

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White_Luck_1289
White_Luck_1289Author

Dropped

2yr
bentobnu
bentobnuLv5

Buddy you're letting this story get boring because 90% of the time they're having sex and no adventure nor emotion just sex you should just say '' we had a long night of love '' and make the story more interesting because it's going downhill

5yr
ProfessorNoob
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More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please!

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Touya_Dono
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MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! DON'T DROP THIS

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