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TheBluePeanutLv35yr
2019-10-17 00:06

I fell in love with this webnovel. The writing style is to die for and the system's personality is adorable. (AND it's a good BL <3) Definitely bookmarking this one !

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I've just learned that I have spent over 24 hours reading this story.....and it's 100 percent worth the time investment!! This story is quite literally ABOUT creating interesting world backgrounds without plot holes, the author accomplishes this goal in every world. The update stability is about once a month but every chapter is thousands, if not TENS of thousands of words long... Well worth the wait. When it comes to Character Design Jia Hyson is an absolutely beautiful example of it. The other characters are great as well but as he's the main character and we spend the most time with him I'll sing his praises in this review. He has a developed personality with defined traits but he has more depth to him than you'd expect and the author never lets him stagnate and become boring! This is also due to the great concept of the story. Speaking of that, the story development is also fantastic. I feel that the pacing is top tier. The author is a master at making the mundane entertaining and the slice of life lively. But they are versatile because the tense moments do what they're meant to do and get you excited and on the edge of your seat in anticipation. The writing quality is always great, completely understandable at all times. The explanation of unfamiliar concepts is very endearing to me, the narration similar to a friend telling you a story after not seeing each other for awhile. If it isn't obvious yet I love this story. I don't like to give reviews before a book is completed but I wouldn't be upset even if I had to follow this story for the rest of my life. I also don't think many things are deserving of a full score. For me and my taste? This story is definitely deserving. (Sorry for the essay but seriously, just read this.)

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This is an excellent novel that contrasts from the norm of transmigration stories. The protagonist(JH), who’s personality i absolutely love, is someone who is *very* shameless and isn’t afraid of doing what he wants. He doesn’t force himself to like others either, which includes the gongs, (to conclude he is, as the novel says, a spicy chicken), making the story feel more natural and realistic.Thus, you can throw away any expectations of love at first sight, since this is NOT one of those qt that has the mc/ml like the mc/ml because of a *special magical feeling* or because they acted like and are thus the ml from the previous world. Next, with the fantastic writing, one can easily be absorbed into the story and have a vivid imagination of each character. The comedy is especially up my isle, such as JH being willing to tease to the extreme, and the conversations between JH and Bebe. I find the concept to be unique too, since JH isn’t transmigration to act as someone, nor is he transmigration to fufill the wishes of others, but to improve the story by being part of it and so on. The gong is great too, since each part has a different personality and could be anyone, which, at this point, I just think of them as different people But since I’m biased, my all time favourite gong is *spoilers on the gongs* Da gong,100%, can’t change my mind.A sweet, loyal, loving, epic, powerful rooster with the cherry on top of being a tsundere, i can’t think of anything that could top that. The only critism i can give is that sometimes the story feels a little draggy, but besides that i have nothing to complain. To sum things up, great writing, comedy, characters, and definitely a top-notch novel worth spending time reading

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