Etiger789Lv155yr
2019-08-31 23:45
What you've written is good so far. The writing is good and I can't see any mistakes. I like the world back ground where you tried to make as less plot holes as possible,and you've explained really well how everything came to be instead of most fan fics where the world's are just there.(if that makes any sense) The only thing that a I have to criticize,but just mostly on my part is in the midle chapters it got a bit confusing in who the main charachter was.did he get sealed did he reancarnate again.what it him or his disciple that meet death. Well keep up the good work.
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I've put some spoilers in dude. Sorry about that, too many bouncing ideas in my head. Hahaa.
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