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Ryuugame
RyuugameLv105yr
2019-09-07 18:54

Ill be no seat I was not expecting much, but it’s surprisingly good. Every once in a while the author loses track of what he is writing. At times I feel like whole sentences or certain key words are missing as I have to infer from the rest of the paragraph to figure out what happened. Especially when there is the line where apparently Harris measures up Charles before leaving Harry and Ron with him. Instead we are just told that Harris looks at him and suddenly Charles thinks to himself, ‘Giants’. Then explaining to Harry what had happened. Maybe instead of taking a look the author could have mentioned that Hagrid looked guardedly at Charles before telling him to take Harry and Ron. Otherwise great work, please take your time and do well. God bless.

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Autocorrect is my bane, Harris is Hagrid. Ill be no seat was not even supposed to be there. God knows why it’s even in the paragraph.

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