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LordSputnik
LordSputnikLv135yr
2019-10-01 09:30

Honest Review This one is great so far! Added to Library right away after first 2 chapters and binged the remaining. The Good: While the characters themselves are nothing unique, the dichotomy between the brothers is good. The setting and world building are great and shows that the author really put in effort into making them feel alive! Love that it's not the traditional good pretty fay vs the evil ugly fay that is so common. The Bad: I don't really like Aura, but that's just me. I also don't like it that they're so young, but that's also just me as I find it hard to believe a 15 year-old has that much wisom and foresight, but I also understand that it is fantasy. Side-note: Maybe I missed it, but why can viseres only visit at night?

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Ah. That isn't explained yet. It'll be in a much later chapter as this will require an info dump of some heaviness. :p But it is taken from the same concept of how european fairies used to steal people away while they dreamt and bring them back before dawn. So people would feel exhausted sfterward and lacked sleep despite sleeping. It was signing half your life away essentially. :) Thanks for the great review. Yep, my protagonists are built to be relatable standard shonen types but it's still how they interact with themselves and the world around them that makes it interesting. :D Sad to hesr you don't like Aura. Hope she endeares herself to you eventually. I'm building a whole new world so I hope you stick around. Also, please expect a similar review from me very soon.

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Sidenote: there was a time when humans were already married by 15 or 16. It's only in our era where kids are pampered until they're 30. Lol Dean's dad certainly made sure they were ready. :D

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An accidental find but a welcomed one. This book ticked all the boxes I like, fantasy check, magic check, cool sword fights check, people that have brains and aren’t just walking cutouts check. The writing quality is superb I have no problems with its grammar, sentence structure, or paragraphs admittedly I may have overlooked a few things I’m not the best when it comes to these things I’ll be the first to admit that, but the author is super friendly, and strives to better the novel taking on readers advice, and criticism so he tends to edit regularly if anything is out of place. Update stability again excellent above and beyond the call of duty. Most people take a while to update, with original novels especially, but this novel has consistent updates with no drop in quality. Around of applause to the author. Story development is again excellent it has a few more subtle hints than other novels, but it still allows those not so quick on the uptake to enjoy it and make them look back and go ah that’s why that is there. Character design for me is brilliant each character has their own unique voice, and personality their physical description are enough for me, though different people have different tastes, but for me it’s awesome. Running out of positive words to heap upon this book, but I shall try anyway. The world building is fantastic it is mystical, and given in small bites but each bite is expanded upon giving a range of flavors to the reader as they explore this magical realm. The real world isn’t irrelevant either, admittedly you don’t spend a lot of time there since all the cool fun stuff is happening In the Fayne world, but it is still given its own feel, and personality with added relevance to the plot the novel feels a lot more alive compared to others. So in summary an excellent read that anyone remotely interested in fantasy should pick up filled to the brim with wacky highjinks, interesting characters, and I’m proud to say I will be continuing to read this novel to see where it goes. 🙃

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