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Grimthorn
GrimthornLv54yr
2019-12-17 00:52

An accidental find but a welcomed one. This book ticked all the boxes I like, fantasy check, magic check, cool sword fights check, people that have brains and aren’t just walking cutouts check. The writing quality is superb I have no problems with its grammar, sentence structure, or paragraphs admittedly I may have overlooked a few things I’m not the best when it comes to these things I’ll be the first to admit that, but the author is super friendly, and strives to better the novel taking on readers advice, and criticism so he tends to edit regularly if anything is out of place. Update stability again excellent above and beyond the call of duty. Most people take a while to update, with original novels especially, but this novel has consistent updates with no drop in quality. Around of applause to the author. Story development is again excellent it has a few more subtle hints than other novels, but it still allows those not so quick on the uptake to enjoy it and make them look back and go ah that’s why that is there. Character design for me is brilliant each character has their own unique voice, and personality their physical description are enough for me, though different people have different tastes, but for me it’s awesome. Running out of positive words to heap upon this book, but I shall try anyway. The world building is fantastic it is mystical, and given in small bites but each bite is expanded upon giving a range of flavors to the reader as they explore this magical realm. The real world isn’t irrelevant either, admittedly you don’t spend a lot of time there since all the cool fun stuff is happening In the Fayne world, but it is still given its own feel, and personality with added relevance to the plot the novel feels a lot more alive compared to others. So in summary an excellent read that anyone remotely interested in fantasy should pick up filled to the brim with wacky highjinks, interesting characters, and I’m proud to say I will be continuing to read this novel to see where it goes. 🙃

The Foolhardies

GD_Cruz
4.7
232 Chs

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GD_Cruz
GD_CruzAuthor

Wacky hijinks -- I don't hear that often enough but I'm glad that was among your many descriptions for the wacky tsle I'm weaving. As one of my top readers who's always willing to lend your insight to the Foolhardies, I can't tell you enough how much I appreciate it. It's not easy writing a 100+ novel that you hope people wl enjoy. Having a fan willing to share his thoughts is loads of help! Ergo, one of the characters in this novel is actually named Grimmthorn! Cheers. :)

4yr
Grimthorn
GrimthornLv5

Tsk I need to sound as unbiased as possible they don’t need to know how you bribed me. 😅

GD_Cruz:Wacky hijinks -- I don't hear that often enough but I'm glad that was among your many descriptions for the wacky tsle I'm weaving. As one of my top readers who's always willing to lend your insight to the Foolhardies, I can't tell you enough how much I appreciate it. It's not easy writing a 100+ novel that you hope people wl enjoy. Having a fan willing to share his thoughts is loads of help! Ergo, one of the characters in this novel is actually named Grimmthorn! Cheers. :)
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GD_Cruz
GD_CruzAuthor

Bwahahahahahahahahahaha

Grimthorn:Tsk I need to sound as unbiased as possible they don’t need to know how you bribed me. 😅
4yr
LiLhyz
LiLhyzLv13

Amazing review

4yr
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GD_Cruz
GD_CruzAuthor

Hello, fellow viseres! I'm G.D. Cruz, freshman web author and enthusiastic scribe for the denizens of the Feyne, the realm of fairies. Shameless self-plugging aside, I hope you enjoy this story, the relatable characters you're about to meet, their adventure, and the world we're building together. As I'm a huge dork for high fantasy and YA stories, I wanted to build a world with both elements at the forefront, and as I'm planning everything in arcs, expect the tale of the Foolhardies to be a long, and hopefully, very fun ride. I'll do my best to publish a chapter daily as I know how it feels to be waiting an extremely long time for the sequel (ahem, ahem, Mr. Martin) and I don't want you guys to wait. Although apologies in advance if I'm late as sometimes the real world and my day job will get in the way. That said, expect chapter 2 - 6 to arrive on time starting tonight. Finally, allow me to welcome you all to the Fayne! Brace yourself, it's going to be foolhardy!

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LoneStar
LoneStarLv10

Quality - That's how I would sum up this novel so far. The story is interesting, the characters are engaging, and the setting is portrayed very well. I have no trouble at all imagining the scenes and the grammar is top rate. If the author keeps the quality the same... I have no doubt this will be one of the best novels on this site. One suggestion: make sure your paragraphs aren't too large - Large blocks of text can be offputting on the app. Keep it up the good work! I'll be waiting for future updates.

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LordThaddy
LordThaddyLv10

This is probably the best story I’ve encountered so far. Excellent plot , great pacing , awesome references, likeable characters. It’s on its way to being an amazing story. Reminds me of kingdom when I first started reading that manga but with an excellent fantasy twist. The fantasy elements don’t overpower the realism in this story and that is what makes this amazing read to me. I need more chapters this story is a wonder drug

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Tea_Tae
Tea_TaeLv13

I always have the good luck of running into novels with good writing. This one probably falls on the high end tier of good writing. Easy to read, amazing MC and some action. It's gonna satisfy all the dorks like us who love gaming and anime. Keep it up GD!

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Sani2341
Sani2341Lv3

So a bunch more chapters in and I feel like sharing another review with potential readers. The development of the whole cast has so far progressed rather smoothly and most characters seem interesting enough that I am looking forward to what they'll do next. The battles written so far do seem rather well thought out, and the focus on the strategic level of what's going on rather than the singular focus on the hero's personal fight(which is much more common in fantasy ime) is both refreshing and a nice fit for Dean's shown capabilities. There stil isn't much to say about the quality of the writing, it is still much better than a lot of stories on WebNovel. The divide between fay and normal world has so far been maintained, but thee have been alusions to issues resulting from having to interact with both.

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PumpHer
PumpHerLv2

Hi, I'm from the Ditto Sect and I support this story by GD_Cruz. I'm role playing the brother of the main character. Watch me on how I'll carry Dean through the obstacles sent to us in the Fairy World. Read now!

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peerlessdaomaster
peerlessdaomasterLv4

Hello fellow webnobelers hahahaha Just here to do a review not introduce my self So about the book I love magic so one of the best book for me If any of you out there loves magic try out this book there is action there too

4yr
RedLaw
RedLawLv13

A very interesting story. The mc is a little naive despite being smart but hey, he truly young. At least at his age I didn't make war strategy and fought or killed. This the story of a young man trying is all to give his brother his liberty. From the start we are sent in our world different from our with creature different from us. There some things I don't like in the story(well it's mostly some characters who grate on my nerves ) but all in all this story is truly good. Just a heads up. If you want to see a OP mc who can destroy army with one wave of his hands, this story isn't for you. This story is about a mc who must use his newly obtained power and his mind in order stay ahead of everyone. The fight will generally be large scale wars.

5yr
dreamygurl7968
dreamygurl7968Lv4

Hmm , the story is good . The story is interesting something new for me . I like the idea . The story is still progressing . Just hoping it will be interesting journey .

5yr
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