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Review Detail of Docnox in Pokemon: Animus

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Docnox
DocnoxAuthor4yrDocnox

My take on a more realistic Pokémon World. Set 20 years post Red/Blue/Anime Season 1. All regions included, no cheat system or OP powers. MC is a plucky 30ish dude transmigrated amnesiac. No Harem, No sinister world threatening plot, just fun adventures from an overgrown kid. Kurt has some strange flavors of luck and Pokémon with equally strange personalities. There’re appearances from many familiar characters and everyone is straight out of the games or show. ‘So what is different?’ you might ask. Well for example, caught Pokémon don’t teleport. Evolution isn’t a cut scene with an epilepsy warning, and that level 2 pidgy aint flying your butt cross country. Story is moving from another site so after a round of fresh grammar checks I get some new content coming.

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Pokemon: Animus

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Bee_n_Jackal
Bee_n_JackalLv3Bee_n_Jackal

Hey wanted to know if this story is discontinued or not?

newthings
newthingsLv6newthings

mc doesnt have any previous memory of his world?

Docnox
DocnoxAuthorDocnox

None pertaining to himself

Mistress_of_Wolves
Mistress_of_WolvesLv12Mistress_of_Wolves

Yeah, the mc has no clue who is is, whether he has a family, or even his age. All he has is an estimate for his age, a name given to him by his new GF, and vauge feelings of needing to take care of a pair of brats he meets. (And they are brats). As for general world knowledge from his original, he apparently remembers the games from up to Diamond/Pearl, but he doesnct have a photographic memory of them, or a pokedex in his head. And most of the info he does remember is outdated by 2 decades. Then he also has knowledge on acuba gear, so he might have been a diver or dive insteuctor. If he had displayed fighting prowess beaides a aucker punch or soccer kick, i'd say he was in some countries navy. Also, just to note, one of the characters (i think it was Naomi), commented on the fact that his accent was from the Galar region, which is basically the British isles (Great Britain, Scottland, and Ireland). So that gives a clue to his identity. All we need is more info.

newthings:mc doesnt have any previous memory of his world?
Jeremy_Kramer
Jeremy_KramerLv5Jeremy_Kramer

You say no harem, but is there a love interest/romance?

RookieRiku
RookieRikuLv14RookieRiku

I am super inspired by the way that you wrote the story with its take on reality, is it okay if I use some of the real-world stuff? Like the taxes, evolution, jobs, stuff like that?

Docnox
DocnoxAuthorDocnox

Go for it lol, just remeber to always be Afraid of Nintendo. Theyve sued charities over pokemon.

RookieRiku:I am super inspired by the way that you wrote the story with its take on reality, is it okay if I use some of the real-world stuff? Like the taxes, evolution, jobs, stuff like that?
RookieRiku
RookieRikuLv14RookieRiku

Thanks for the heads up, keep up the good work!

Docnox:Go for it lol, just remeber to always be Afraid of Nintendo. Theyve sued charities over pokemon.
CrimsonPhoenix
CrimsonPhoenixLv13CrimsonPhoenix

u drop?

Docnox
DocnoxAuthorDocnox

Nah just have a couple of funerals to attend

CrimsonPhoenix:u drop?
CrimsonPhoenix
CrimsonPhoenixLv13CrimsonPhoenix

ah k best of luck with that are for the losses

Docnox:Nah just have a couple of funerals to attend
CrimsonPhoenix
CrimsonPhoenixLv13CrimsonPhoenix

srry*

CrimsonPhoenix:ah k best of luck with that are for the losses
KoroSensei14
KoroSensei14Lv14KoroSensei14

Same saw no harem but what about a single partner down the line?

Jeremy_Kramer:You say no harem, but is there a love interest/romance?
Docnox
DocnoxAuthorDocnox

Lol to those that asked, he does get a girl. she is canon to the world. no, it’s not one of the big names.

MapleHound
MapleHoundLv15MapleHound

In the summary you said that the story takes place 20 years after the events of the anime. I have a few problems with this...#1 Ash has been 10 years old for the 24 years. #2 Which generation of Anime are you talking about? Different events happened in different generations. Different companions, different starters, different teams, different legendary Pokémon.

Docnox
DocnoxAuthorDocnox

The anime doesn’t care about logical time progression. clearly. so just assume all seasons occurred in one year cause every season is represented in this story.

MapleHound:In the summary you said that the story takes place 20 years after the events of the anime. I have a few problems with this...#1 Ash has been 10 years old for the 24 years. #2 Which generation of Anime are you talking about? Different events happened in different generations. Different companions, different starters, different teams, different legendary Pokémon.
America_Yea
America_YeaLv3America_Yea

Rip anyone reading on a work phone or the web version I guess. We can only comment on reviews now and it cuts off the last paragraph or 2 right from the getgo. I'm moving my reading over to scribble hub/royal road since this site is now garbage. They fixed it then immidiately broke it again so I've given up any hope i had for webnovel.

Kevin_Barclay
Kevin_BarclayLv2Kevin_Barclay

Are you going to write more chapter of your book?

Docnox
DocnoxAuthorDocnox

Yup, im quitting my job here in a few weeks. The hope is to hit the ground running after

Kevin_Barclay:Are you going to write more chapter of your book?
Kevin_Barclay
Kevin_BarclayLv2Kevin_Barclay

cool by The way what does this book about again?

Docnox:Yup, im quitting my job here in a few weeks. The hope is to hit the ground running after
Docnox
DocnoxAuthorDocnox

An action hero type character in a more realistic pokemon world

Kevin_Barclay:cool by The way what does this book about again?