Another thing, there’s quite a bit of terms and names being thrown about that just fly over the head of someone who’s only seen the show and not read the books. A little bit of well used context here and there would be nice.

I’m going to hold off a little longer for reviewing. the age issue is very off putting. Also it’s odd how blood thirsty he is. His personality is very bent.

The ages in this story are absurd. if all the younger characters gained at least 5 years then it might make sense.

Why the hll is every character a minor?

Yes there is aheavy amount of updates

Oh just let lanie kill him already

Oof… booo

While the premis is interesting, the character development is completely inconsistent. One minute hes thinking clear the next its chaos. And every time you think he’s free, nope! Just throw out all the character development and start over.

Way lame, im out. Mad i wasted my time reading to here.

Hope you found your way back, theres been alot of work from the start

Its more like his natural talent. he didn’t get it from someone or something. It’s who he is. I tried being clear about it without giving everything away, but he is an aspect of a greater being that made a deal with Arceus for ‘entry,’ not power.

Foster growth, weed out the rot. Simple mission statement