Quick review: If there is one good point in the whole story, that would be the central behind the story being an interesting concept. As for everything else, plot development and character introduction was good in the first 15 chapters. You could find some plot holes and stuff but it wasn't to the point of making it unbearable. The story went downhill after that. With the mc taking illogical actions to making retarded mistakes, Having his personality do an 180 flip and others. The worst being random events happening all over the place along with the story being forced from one end to the other. -End of quick review Details: Translation Quality 3/5 I would rate it lower since it started well and degraded in the later chapters but for the sake of the first chapters I'll give it a 3. Stability of Updates 5/5 With 24 chapters a week there is not much to say. Story development 2/5 The story developed rather fine at the start but latter it just went all over the place. One event happened and before it was over the author was already adding other random **** for no reason. Character design 1/5 I don't even know where to start? From the fact that the main character's personality is all jabbled up to the point of him being introduced as an intelectual when he clearly is not? Or from the fact that the author built up characters and then just went balistic with an 'oh well let's just kick them out of the window' within 1 chapter. Literally just 1 chapter, every side character that helped the mc since the start of the novel was just kicked out due to the mc's stupidity. I am glad for the side characters actually taking the logical action. World background 2/5 I can't say I know a lot about the world with the only clear thing being that there is a war about to break out and that's it. Other than that, police is non exsistent even though it is mentioned several times. The mc can just walk around with a sword in hand take out a few people in the streets filled with passers-by and noone will notice. The dream realm was kind of interesting but that was all until the point he went to the church. After that, it was all mumbo jumbo nightmare? ****. Personal score: 2/5 Interesting concept, bad execution. Would not recommend reading.
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