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JKaiya
JKaiyaLv45yr
2020-04-13 07:15

Although I like the book, there is no way the rating is so high... The book has lots of plot armor and story holes. The writer self contradicts what was written earlier a lot too. Also this is not really a horror genre... To me it feels like a cultivation or action as the horror is pretty bland, it only sets up the premise of the story. Lots of things in the story also seemed forced, and the story flow needs work. The further into the story you get (at 80 chaps right now) the more the story turns into a boring flat storyplay. The characters are some of the most illogical ones I've ever seen in reading, though they aren't strictly 2D like most Isekais, they are definitely stupid and are also used by author to heavily force plot and armor. MC makes lots of illogical decisions too. The MCs best friend also quickly devolves into a flat forgotten character that is obviously going to be used to force the story in the future with all the hints... The story is somewhat frustrating to read because of how dumb the MC is, how the author made the characters in the story... From a story standpoint, this is a mess other than the grammar.

Nightmare's Call

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586 Chs

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Vyte
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Like it so far, Great premise. Have to rate it 5 stars as nothing has given me qualms so far. Will update review later on where there is more content to judge on

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webHead
webHeadLv4

Great story so far. I like author's unique style, the characters and the plot. It's not as usual as some other webnovel stories. I am looking forward for the next chapters. Thanks for picking this up!

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Shadowles_Immortal
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Stopped at Chapter 25. Introduced best friend and some side characters but due to the fact that he's actually a 30+ year old transmigrator douche-bag, they get pushed to the side simply because he was too "mature" for them. Don't introduce characters in detail and with significance, especially "best friends" then dump them 10 chapters later because he's too grown for them. Lazy a$$ writing. And makes for a very unlikable MC. Verdict: dropped.

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Plot_Armor
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Not sure why people are raving about this story. It's going all over the place: MC is a Reincarnator, then he gets power-up in dreams. The prologue seems to introduce an horror story but it's more like a cultivator story or western fantasy D&D style. The MC is introduced as intelligent but makes dumb after dumb decisions. The power creep between dream and reality is ridiculous and supported by flimsy character development. Plot devices are dropped like bombshells in a very forced manner.

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5_night
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Pretty disappointed that such a great storyline would end with such pathetic and stupid main character and stupid world . Such a waste for it .

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Pretty alright book so far, it's just a shame the book has been out for 2 days and already missed a release. Hopefully this isn't a sign of what's to come.

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The book started at a very slow pace, but it must be part of the plot so it's okay. World building is there and it has many rooms for growth. Character development has not yet progressed much, but with this type of writing quality, then it will surely improve. The plot itself is very interesting and mysterious. It definitely is a good read and not boring. Commend!

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