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Condemned
CondemnedLv45yr
2020-01-06 14:22

The book started at a very slow pace, but it must be part of the plot so it's okay. World building is there and it has many rooms for growth. Character development has not yet progressed much, but with this type of writing quality, then it will surely improve. The plot itself is very interesting and mysterious. It definitely is a good read and not boring. Commend!

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andrwood
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I don’t know about you, but I almost burned out from his two stupid deeds in the last chapters. If you call it a great plot, it’s scary to imagine what will happen next

Condemned
CondemnedLv4

I never said it was a great plot. I said it was interesting. And besides, it's too early to judge the book with only a few chapters.

andrwood:I don’t know about you, but I almost burned out from his two stupid deeds in the last chapters. If you call it a great plot, it’s scary to imagine what will happen next
andrwood
andrwoodLv6

I agree that it is too early to draw conclusions, so I am waiting for more chapters. But the last 3-4 chapters were almost enough to quit reading this novel. Unfortunately, the translator does not issue more chapters at the moment.

Condemned:I never said it was a great plot. I said it was interesting. And besides, it's too early to judge the book with only a few chapters.
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