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Landsraad
LandsraadLv54yr
2020-09-22 06:23

The Adult Content tag should be removed since the explicit scenes have been removed. Just basic killing and innuendos don't quite qualify as Adult Content or Disney couldn't peddle their stuff to kiddos

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BotwaCazador
BotwaCazadorAuthor

Who said all the "explicit" scenes were removed? It has been toned down, but there is still ***** content. Thanks for the review.

WillAMVz
WillAMVzLv13

Where? 30 chapters in so far an they have all quiet literally been removed. Its funny because i actually started reading this because i thought it had Those scenes.

BotwaCazador:Who said all the "explicit" scenes were removed? It has been toned down, but there is still ***** content. Thanks for the review.
WillAMVz
WillAMVzLv13

P.S. I like the story so continuing, and if i see it i will come back and change. Until then i’m with this guy take of that tag because its not that kind of novel anymore.

SD_Liv
SD_LivLv4

Are the scenes deleted? What for? and are there any sites where these scenes have not been deleted?

BotwaCazador:Who said all the "explicit" scenes were removed? It has been toned down, but there is still ***** content. Thanks for the review.
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tupster29Lv11

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