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IZZY_GOMES
IZZY_GOMESLv15yr
2019-08-02 01:48

This is a story that follows MC Nicholas Phire, an arsonist dubbed 'Phoenix Phire by the media. I like the start in the Gladis Hub. The game Colonial has potential, I like the choices involved in making a real custom character.

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Leobanky
LeobankyLv4

The name will make some read it

SaltyHalaman03
SaltyHalaman03Lv5

Is there really an ***** content??

EmeraldSaRose
EmeraldSaRoseLv12

Yes, the dude is having sex with some random chick he just met basically every other chapters. It's kinda annoying actually, how much of a poonhound he is

SaltyHalaman03:Is there really an ***** content??
BotwaCazador
BotwaCazadorAuthor

Poon hound? Interesting phrase. The “pooning” is more because he spent the past few years either in prison or on the run. He was expecting that his life was over, instead he is living a much different life. A hundred chapters later the poon count is the same as it is in chapter 15. So it isn’t something that persists beyond the very beginning. Thanks for reading.

EmeraldSaRose:Yes, the dude is having sex with some random chick he just met basically every other chapters. It's kinda annoying actually, how much of a poonhound he is
EmeraldSaRose
EmeraldSaRoseLv12

You are most welcome. Now, I don't really mind erotica thrown in but at least for me it was breaking up the flow of story and messing with my suspension of disbelief. Glad to know it won't be a predominant factor going forward.

BotwaCazador:Poon hound? Interesting phrase. The “pooning” is more because he spent the past few years either in prison or on the run. He was expecting that his life was over, instead he is living a much different life. A hundred chapters later the poon count is the same as it is in chapter 15. So it isn’t something that persists beyond the very beginning. Thanks for reading.
Woolben_Raymond
Woolben_RaymondLv2

Hell yeah

Leobanky:The name will make some read it
Woolben_Raymond
Woolben_RaymondLv2

Hell yeah

Leobanky:The name will make some read it
Other Reviews
tupster29
tupster29Lv11

Pretty dang good. The RL prologue introducing the character and why he ends up playing the game is brief but believable, its refreshing to see neither the lazy cliche "Everyone has enough disposable income to spend every day playing a game" nor filler chapters dedicated to RL just to make the story "realistic". Character developments good so far too, slow in a good way, where we are told an appropriate amount of information about a character for how long the MC has known them (there's no "you saved my life so here's my entire life history and also my unending loyalty). Not to say the MC doesn't quickly form relationships(in a way that fits his character/personality), but so far everything has been progressing naturally. The only criticisms I have are not knowing much about the MC's history, but I'm only on chp 14 so it could still be coming, or it might be more of a gradual reveal, either way I'd like to know just a bit more early on. Also, the world is large, and location names are kinda hard to keep track of. If anyone is thrown by other reviews complaining about the sex, know it isn't really described explicitly(so far I've only seen 1 short instance describing the sex, 95% of the time its "they kissed and went to the bedroom", end paragraph, then "After an enjoyable night MC woke up" and its right back to the story). Also wouldn't describe it as "harem", he's not collecting girls for his adventuring party or anything, it's more like he's a warm, passionate guy(see fire affinity), and having casual sex in a no-risk virtual world fits his and others characters.

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