This is a story that follows MC Nicholas Phire, an arsonist dubbed 'Phoenix Phire by the media. I like the start in the Gladis Hub. The game Colonial has potential, I like the choices involved in making a real custom character.
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LIKEPoon hound? Interesting phrase. The “pooning” is more because he spent the past few years either in prison or on the run. He was expecting that his life was over, instead he is living a much different life. A hundred chapters later the poon count is the same as it is in chapter 15. So it isn’t something that persists beyond the very beginning. Thanks for reading.
EmeraldSaRose:Yes, the dude is having sex with some random chick he just met basically every other chapters. It's kinda annoying actually, how much of a poonhound he is
You are most welcome. Now, I don't really mind erotica thrown in but at least for me it was breaking up the flow of story and messing with my suspension of disbelief. Glad to know it won't be a predominant factor going forward.
BotwaCazador:Poon hound? Interesting phrase. The “pooning” is more because he spent the past few years either in prison or on the run. He was expecting that his life was over, instead he is living a much different life. A hundred chapters later the poon count is the same as it is in chapter 15. So it isn’t something that persists beyond the very beginning. Thanks for reading.