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boov
boovLv55yr
2020-04-03 23:39

The premise is a mc who is a killer n arsonist and goes into game and becomes a tailor and makes undergarments for women... Coincidentally meets only women and tries to befriend them all so he can hook up with someone....virgin stuff....i read that the first 30chapters are like that amd after that comes the real story...so i have to put myself read all that harem **** ? No thanks...either delete them or use them as a separate story lol...

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Thrakis
ThrakisLv11

Isn't that your narrow view? Who says he's trying to hook up with them? Is he romancing them? Or are you one of those virgins who has decided that men and women can't be normal friends?

boov
boovLv5

Stop following me and getting butthurt from my opinion....the author himself acknowledged the first 30chapters are for fun...go home virgin boy and read as much harem **** u like...i dont care about opinion

Thrakis:Isn't that your narrow view? Who says he's trying to hook up with them? Is he romancing them? Or are you one of those virgins who has decided that men and women can't be normal friends?
Thrakis
ThrakisLv11

Except most of that was edited out retard.

boov:Stop following me and getting butthurt from my opinion....the author himself acknowledged the first 30chapters are for fun...go home virgin boy and read as much harem **** u like...i dont care about opinion
boov
boovLv5

Sad lil kid...

Thrakis:Except most of that was edited out retard.
GooseOverlord
GooseOverlordLv15

I don't know Thrakis and I don't know Boov. MC does meet a lot of female characters early and does try to hook up with all of them. But it makes sense, this is a guy that's been on trial for presumably awhile and has had limited female contact. Thrakis seems to be an idiot attacking you for having an opinion that he doesn't share. He flirts with a lot of the female characters he meets throughout the story but doesn't hook up with all of them not even most of them. There are many male characters as well.

boov
boovLv5

Well man thats my point...and i simply dont like harem so i stopped reading and thought the rating is too high thats all...but the dude above u has issues ...xD

GooseOverlord:I don't know Thrakis and I don't know Boov. MC does meet a lot of female characters early and does try to hook up with all of them. But it makes sense, this is a guy that's been on trial for presumably awhile and has had limited female contact. Thrakis seems to be an idiot attacking you for having an opinion that he doesn't share. He flirts with a lot of the female characters he meets throughout the story but doesn't hook up with all of them not even most of them. There are many male characters as well.
Ji_Yidao
Ji_YidaoLv14

Its fine if u dont like the novel, but the rating is high because people think the book is good. You making a review to lower the rating just because you dont like harem is scummy.

boov:Well man thats my point...and i simply dont like harem so i stopped reading and thought the rating is too high thats all...but the dude above u has issues ...xD
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

after the 30 chapters there is a pay wall for the rest.

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tupster29
tupster29Lv11

Pretty dang good. The RL prologue introducing the character and why he ends up playing the game is brief but believable, its refreshing to see neither the lazy cliche "Everyone has enough disposable income to spend every day playing a game" nor filler chapters dedicated to RL just to make the story "realistic". Character developments good so far too, slow in a good way, where we are told an appropriate amount of information about a character for how long the MC has known them (there's no "you saved my life so here's my entire life history and also my unending loyalty). Not to say the MC doesn't quickly form relationships(in a way that fits his character/personality), but so far everything has been progressing naturally. The only criticisms I have are not knowing much about the MC's history, but I'm only on chp 14 so it could still be coming, or it might be more of a gradual reveal, either way I'd like to know just a bit more early on. Also, the world is large, and location names are kinda hard to keep track of. If anyone is thrown by other reviews complaining about the sex, know it isn't really described explicitly(so far I've only seen 1 short instance describing the sex, 95% of the time its "they kissed and went to the bedroom", end paragraph, then "After an enjoyable night MC woke up" and its right back to the story). Also wouldn't describe it as "harem", he's not collecting girls for his adventuring party or anything, it's more like he's a warm, passionate guy(see fire affinity), and having casual sex in a no-risk virtual world fits his and others characters.

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