Thrakis

This story is a prime example of why even decent writers need an editor. The multidirectional plot frequently goes off the rails, creating world-breaking players and scenarios that make no sense and aren't relevant to the story. He keeps adding so many overpowered female players that, after a while, even that is boring. An editor would have reined the author in, keeping him from falling into his own world where the next big thing doesn't make sense. The pacing is horrible. It's filled with, now our future is assured," then a few paragraphs later... this could end everything we worked for. Pick a lane and stay in it, its either a VRMMO story or a cultivation story.

Yeah, that was a huge mistake.

You should give up on romance subplots; it's not your strong suit.

How did this get so bad in ten chapters? Isn't Ren much older than everyone else? Why is he acting like a child? You've established that he beta all the way. Dropped.

Great fantasy story combing piracy, crafting and humor. Witty dialogue, smart male lead and plenty of interesting support characters rounding out the story. From start to current progress (ch22), it's a page turner.

Ringo knows, she saw it immediately when OP won Doubler Canyon on the second day of class. Hitch your ride to this kid because he's a T-Rex.

Love me some Rainbow hair.

Hold my nuts while I deal with this.

I figured it was time OP started paying their members. Even if they are two years ahead of the curriculum, they've managed to claim a huge share of the profits in Maelstrom.

Bo just posted the first part of TAP under the title, The Prodigal Musician, Exodus Book I.