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ProfoundLazyness
ProfoundLazynessLv25yr
2019-11-27 15:19

7 Chapters in, and if the story's gonna go on like this I'm out. Mc's relationships feel way too forced, or maybe people in that world are just all that way? Original premise, not my cup of tea. MC too blunt. Feels like he wouldn't be able to keep any secrets and will just boldly expose all his information. Whatever I hate it, but it doesn't mean you will so here's the honest rating. Writing Quality 4.5/5 - Too many curse words for me, it just throws me off. Stability of Updates 5/5 - Dunno, just started it. Story Development 4.5/5 - Dunno. Character Design 5/5 - No cardboard or cookie cutter. Pretty original. World Background 2/5 - Just 7 chapters in, but I'm hating both the mmo and the real world. And the reasons mc is where he is. Whatever.

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BotwaCazador
BotwaCazadorAuthor

Thanks for taking the time to review.

Shadowdracul
ShadowdraculLv5

We Need more people like you on this site, Despite not liking the novel after reading the 7 chapters you still gave it five stars and gave your honest opinion without cursing the story. Bravo Man, Keep it up. 👍

Felix_Neros
Felix_NerosLv13

Hey random reviewer! Do you know wether or not Author deletes negative reviews? The book is not bad per se, but there are some grammar issues, little description, some paragraphs can be rather confusing etc. I’d expect a solid 4.3-4.4. This isn’t an accusation, but review deletion is not extremely uncommon either, unfortunately.

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tupster29
tupster29Lv11

Pretty dang good. The RL prologue introducing the character and why he ends up playing the game is brief but believable, its refreshing to see neither the lazy cliche "Everyone has enough disposable income to spend every day playing a game" nor filler chapters dedicated to RL just to make the story "realistic". Character developments good so far too, slow in a good way, where we are told an appropriate amount of information about a character for how long the MC has known them (there's no "you saved my life so here's my entire life history and also my unending loyalty). Not to say the MC doesn't quickly form relationships(in a way that fits his character/personality), but so far everything has been progressing naturally. The only criticisms I have are not knowing much about the MC's history, but I'm only on chp 14 so it could still be coming, or it might be more of a gradual reveal, either way I'd like to know just a bit more early on. Also, the world is large, and location names are kinda hard to keep track of. If anyone is thrown by other reviews complaining about the sex, know it isn't really described explicitly(so far I've only seen 1 short instance describing the sex, 95% of the time its "they kissed and went to the bedroom", end paragraph, then "After an enjoyable night MC woke up" and its right back to the story). Also wouldn't describe it as "harem", he's not collecting girls for his adventuring party or anything, it's more like he's a warm, passionate guy(see fire affinity), and having casual sex in a no-risk virtual world fits his and others characters.

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