Item: [Completed] Half Saiyan in Tales of Demons and Gods
Rating: 3.8
Author: Sondre

SondreLv135yr

2019-12-10 05:24

While the writing quality is far from the worst I have seen here, it is still riddled with flaws, mostly using the wrong word/ misspelling names and such. The plot is interesting and done in an engaging manner that draws you in. The main character is a sayian training junkie, to the point that he forgets the people around him, at times he feels colder towards his family than his enemies. Then there are other times where he is warm and caring. The other characters are mostly the same as the original except for the girls in his harem, and the harem candidates. I do enjoy this fanfic quite a bit, but I would only recommend it if you are fine with below average writing quality (mostly the wrong words/ names)

[Completed] Half Saiyan in Tales of Demons and Gods

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