It's good but I think you should change the cover image, it uh... ain't exactly the best (no offence buddy). I think you would be able to attract more readers that way.

I like and hate this novel at the same time. It's hard to hind a novel with a grammar worse than here. Author is using words that sound similar to what he really means. Sometimes you need to read the paragraph twice to understand what is going on. From time to time names are mismatched. Lame jokes aren't making it better ither. There are also issues with time here. Author may have said: "Two hours", but you understand that it happened in just two seconds... And here am I... Crying blood tears because of the grammar, but still reading, hoping that the author will at least use Grammarly/Crio.

I highly recommended to read this fanfic tho I feel bad on what becomes on Nei li in this fic. I read the orginal TDG and Nei Li want his home to survive from destruction like in his last life and get the girl he loves. I hope theres a closure to Nei Li since MC has bigger adventure outside of TDG world.

Poorly written. Even if this is a "wish fulfillment" type of fanfic, please organise and think through your wishes. Like, if you summon shenron and make an incomprehensible noise while making a wish. I'm sure shenron wouldn't be able to grant it. I mean, this is only an analogy and i still think new writers like you should strive to improve.. I just hope you will still continue to write and waste everyone's time.. Kidding aside, I've read 1 chapter and am not really inclined to waste more time reading..

Unreadable (You won't understand sh¡t most of the time since it has horrible grammar and a minimal amount of proper sentences). Character interactions feel empty and like a monologue most of the time (probably because of the bad english). Sometimes you will cringe a lot because of interactions that make no sense. There are plot holes everywhere because the world isn't properly constructed. MC has no defined moral compass, is an hypocrite and just plain boring. Overall, if you have high standards, don't read this, because you will find it a waste of time.

A story showing different sides of the characters of TALES OF DEMONS AND GODS. It is one of the best fanfiction that depicts the world very well and does not seem too out of place despite adding a few characters. Although some moments are too forceful but overall it is a good story. Keep updating.

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the story idea I'd give it a 4 out of 5. but the story itself is really dragged down by poor grammar and phrasing. it's so bad I couldn't bring myself to read more than three chapters. in fact it's so bad most people can barely comprehend what's happening in the story. then there's the phrasing and by that I mean the way things are said or described in the story. it's like if you ever had a foreigner friend who doesn't speak your language very well but he says things technically correct but they're awkwardly stated because of his poor understanding of the language he's trying to speak and then that friend tries to go write a story that is what reading this is like. 😅 as it is very clear the person who wrote this even if I didn't look at their profile I could pretty easily deduce that their first language is definitely not English. personally I suggest they reach out to to somebody for help or their audience to fix their grammar and phrasing so they can grow from this as a writer and people can enjoy their story. as right now no one can really bear to read this for very long and I highly suspect the other reviews are fake.