Im going to tell you why this is trash, he art along with the story is super inconsistent, from page one, her protagonist is unlikable (therefore you don't care for her) there is know set plot, or problem that needs to be solved, and whenever she does point one out , there is no sense of urgency. The Character design lacked attention to detail or any research. The tone comes off as hateful and cynical to people who are different (Which I don't think she was aiming for) SIDENOTE: I got bored on the first page. In a book that's taking place in a magical mysterious world populated by beasts hybrids, you would think she would make use of vibrant color pallettes and draw inspiration from Animals in reality. But no, her leopard is hideous and it looks nothing like a leopard, she drew a Cheetah. She could be better at Conveying motion in what are supposed to be action scenes. finally I am very disappointed in how closed minded the author is and it shows in her comic, its already very confined, and I don't think it will ever expand ir evolve. Just stick to webtoon if this is the best Webnovel can do.
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Yes I totally agree! It seems like in the comment section is just blowing up the authors ego and not helping the author by telling them that everything is perfect and interesting when it’s not.
We could write something wayyy better
Thank you that’s what I said the only likable character for me so far is the snake and blonde hair blue eyed leopard guy and there’s body shaming for days and I’ve concluded the author hates freckles and it’s just a mess I’m so glad I’m not alone in this thought that this is a terrible Webnovel
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I thought the girl just sounds immature and stupid a lot of times. And that might just be the truth, and in this world they might not care for that too much. I agree that some aspects of the story itself could be done better and be more compelling. I would not cretique the art because overall it was beautiful. I think there might have been improvements in technique, but not knowing what level the artist is, that is really not something that bothered me too much.
I know right! The girl just annoys me so much. Shes not interesting. It's like she has NO development at all. You can tell what her character is gonna do. It's too predictable that I have to stop reading it.
What chapet are you on
the story gets better as you go also this might not be your manga type and for someone who doesn't like the hate speech you certainly are doing a lot of hate speech yourself. The art is done by a whole team it is not one person doing the art. if you do not like a manga find another one don't be rude. Why don't you send me a manga that you like the best and I'll let you know what I think.
I am up to date on the story because I have been enjoying it, but I have to say that Winston ending up with QingQing just set me off! I desperately wanted him to end up with a female who sees him for who he is and loves him because of how he looks. The author is from a culture where thin and pale is the beauty standard for both men and women where as in Western culture we prefer tanner skin as a sign of a healthy person. I will continue the story but I just wish there would come a female character who changes their world and shows them that females can be self sufficient and battle hardened as well.
i totally agree!
Haha ikr. i got this in an ad and decided to try it but after seeing how it shames larger women and women with freckles that's a big nope for me.
