Item: Harry Potter and the Dual Lord
Rating: 2.2
Author: Unknownlion

UnknownlionLv144yr

2020-05-22 03:21

The story is good story but it has to many plots and sub plots to focus on the mc himself. Some things seems random that was just put in and it just doesn't make sense at times. The mc was good at first but it went downhill when a new family member was added in and after howgarts.

Harry Potter and the Dual Lord

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4.2

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