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2019-09-09 22:06

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Harry Potter and the Dual Lord

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4.2
65 Chs

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RADRIPPER
RADRIPPERLv2

Terrible...another ridiculous mc that seems to get dumber as he gets stronger to make the story have *******...authors should stop making grindy stories if the grind does nothing and all u want is close epic battles that make no sense

5yr

Loyal_Hunter
Loyal_HunterLv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr
MobinHood
MobinHoodLv15

Until he leaves Hogwarts, the story was fantastic. After that it lost in everything except duckedupedness. There are a few completely unreadable chapters. So much potential wasted for a now, at best, bad story.

5yr
ddsurvivor
ddsurvivorLv14

Really can't say much. since a novel should be reviewed within 30-50 chapters. Cause by then some characters is developed and the story background is decent enough to not confuse the reader. Grammar is good. Character development of MC is good. So is his teacher Merlin. Mother and Father and random lovable sister check. LOL So Far love the Novel. Keep it up, Please!

5yr
Lethal_Drinker
Lethal_DrinkerLv4

plot holes, dumb mc, bullshit logic, and it's just boring 馃拃馃拃馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃う馃う馃う馃う馃う馃Η馃Η馃Η馃Η馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃拃馃拃

4yr
Unknownlion
UnknownlionLv14

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Moises_Martinez_5798
Moises_Martinez_5798Lv1

Esta es una de pocas historias realmente mala que dan ganas de no ver m谩s me da asco sobre todo el Mc solo puedo decir una de las peores novelas que he le铆do

4yr
Dator_David
Dator_DavidLv13

CONTINUE THE STORY PLEASE.馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ馃槀馃ぃ馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃憢馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ馃ぉ

4yr
Aduck
AduckLv5

Pretty much the main character is an emo and edgy Mary Sue. No character development at all and the world seems to bend to his will. So only read this story if you are into cardboard characters. Grammar is most fine just a few small mistakes from not checking.

5yr
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