Item: Harry Potter and the Dual Lord
Rating: 4
Author: ddsurvivor

ddsurvivorLv145yr

2019-07-20 11:39

Really can't say much. since a novel should be reviewed within 30-50 chapters. Cause by then some characters is developed and the story background is decent enough to not confuse the reader. Grammar is good. Character development of MC is good. So is his teacher Merlin. Mother and Father and random lovable sister check. LOL So Far love the Novel. Keep it up, Please!

Harry Potter and the Dual Lord

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4.2

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