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Deal_With_It
Deal_With_ItLv55yr
2019-08-29 15:03

The way the story is written is confusing. I read up until after the coffee shop, there were 2 time skips with no explanations of anything The bad reviews must be getting deleted.

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Travo
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Na I don’t delete bad reviews. I respect that people take time when writing their reviews even if they only read 2 chapters. So if they think it’s bad, it’s bad. There’s no reason for me to disrespect someone’s opinions on a fan-fic. It’s not getting me money anyways. I know the beginning is really rough but everyone on the website helped me a lot with structuring and keeping my plots consistent in the later chapters. Hopefully you can look past the really ugly beginning and look at the better ending parts of the novel. The reason this book has been well received is because the competition back then wasn’t that strong. This book probably had lower grammar mistakes than most of it and it has an interesting premise. A spy with amnesia. Well not like Jason Bourne levels of amnesia but a super powered spy with a system that happened to lose 10 years of memories type of amnesia. All in all, I don’t delete reviews, even if some people say to delete them and the writing is super confusing. If that kills your interest, I’m sad to say that it’s been a good but short time and I hope to see you looking at my other works if they ever in the future catch your interests.

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Glasir
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Not bad. I guess. Writing Quality: [4/5] There isn't a lot of errors I can spot. There are a few but it isn't so bad that I couldn't read it. The scenes could be a lot more descriptive but the approach to the character is pretty good. Stability of Updates: [3/5] It's pretty stable on how many times it updates, but there was a 4-5 day wait where there weren't any chapters. Again, the author didn't give us a weekly plan or anything so I might be being a little harsh. Story Development: [5/5] It's really fast in the beginning, like the first 16 years, but it slowed down. A lot. There is two chapters of him talking to Agent Fury and Natasha. But I like it like that. It doesn't feel rushed. It might be slow, but it's always constant. Some parts are just a bit too short though. Like the action scenes with the guards. Character Design: [4/5] The character's not bad but I don't see him being very consistent. He's always changing. Maybe that's the point of being a spy though. Always changing your thoughts to react to different situations better. Think from different angles. World Background: [...] I don't really have anything to say about this one. It's the MCU world with a bit of changes. So far the MC hasn't been alone and explored the world so this might change in the future. The reason I put everything as 5 stars in the actual grading is because of some Jacka** who posted a one-star just by looking at 2 chapters. I'm trying to break even so...here I am. My real opinions are already said on the review though. All in all a 4.2 for me. But you should check it out yourself. See if you like it or not.

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