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SucoDeFruta
SucoDeFrutaLv55yr
2019-07-07 09:12

The story started really bad, mc has no potential, mc seems to be one of those mcs of **** that has nothing to offer for the story, two disappointing chapters, a trash mc with a trash story, two chapters that did not attract the attention two readers

Marvel's Agent Belova

Travo
4.4
16 Chs

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Travo
TravoAuthor

That hurt.

5yr
5
Rime
RimeLv3

It’s literally 2 chapters and you’ve already killed the novel off. It can’t be that bad. No potential. Trash story. Trash MC It only took two chapters for you to come up with that claim. There is no way you’re serious. I feel like you’re a troll. You’ve done nothing to contribute to the story besides point out it’s bad. This dude is a new author with a new idea. We should be encouraging people not putting them down. We should be striving to make people be better versions of themselves. Or something like that. This type of negativity is pretty bad. I checked your last few posts and all I can see is someone being angry. In all your reviews and comments, you’ve never once pointed out why it’s bad. You just encouraged others to not read it. All in all. If you wanna make people not read something. Actually explain why it’s bad. Why did it start out bad? Why were the two chapters disappointing? Why do you think the MC offers nothing to the plot?

5yr
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NukeTouch
NukeTouchLv14

I bet you like to read about harems and op mc. That can be the most cliché of all. Please do explain why the story is trash because I just see potential of characters being put into the MCU. I expect this to be somewhat similar to Agents of Shield due to the fact they can be powerful in their own way but they are not part of the main hero group.

5yr
5
Carefree_shadow
Carefree_shadowLv5

Ya..... no. 2 chapters in and you make such a drastic post on a fan fic? It's like picking up a paper back and reading the intro or prologue chapter and then throwing the book in the trash for not liking "where you think you know" the stories heading.

5yr
4
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GunnerGod
GunnerGodLv14

I like these types of MCU stories but this may sound like I want you to change the story but I just want you to think about it. 1. The mutant ability i believe that it should not be op it should be something that fits is current skill set like enhanced nerves to were he can dodge bullets but not for long. 2.The SYSTEM I believe you should make it so he can only get coins from missions and that the shop only sell information about the future plot of the world but not at a cheap price. These are the only thing I would like you to think about because I find that character development and a slow to medium strength progression is better that becoming OP to quickly and this only my opinion but stories that have the MC become to OP very fast become quite boring really quick. THINK ABOUT THESE SUGGESTIONS 🙂👌

5yr

Glasir
GlasirLv4

Not bad. I guess. Writing Quality: [4/5] There isn't a lot of errors I can spot. There are a few but it isn't so bad that I couldn't read it. The scenes could be a lot more descriptive but the approach to the character is pretty good. Stability of Updates: [3/5] It's pretty stable on how many times it updates, but there was a 4-5 day wait where there weren't any chapters. Again, the author didn't give us a weekly plan or anything so I might be being a little harsh. Story Development: [5/5] It's really fast in the beginning, like the first 16 years, but it slowed down. A lot. There is two chapters of him talking to Agent Fury and Natasha. But I like it like that. It doesn't feel rushed. It might be slow, but it's always constant. Some parts are just a bit too short though. Like the action scenes with the guards. Character Design: [4/5] The character's not bad but I don't see him being very consistent. He's always changing. Maybe that's the point of being a spy though. Always changing your thoughts to react to different situations better. Think from different angles. World Background: [...] I don't really have anything to say about this one. It's the MCU world with a bit of changes. So far the MC hasn't been alone and explored the world so this might change in the future. The reason I put everything as 5 stars in the actual grading is because of some Jacka** who posted a one-star just by looking at 2 chapters. I'm trying to break even so...here I am. My real opinions are already said on the review though. All in all a 4.2 for me. But you should check it out yourself. See if you like it or not.

5yr
Gabriel_Raze
Gabriel_RazeLv5

This was such a great story. How could you this!😭😭😭 I get it dude, real life stuff. But man this was so good, maybe write when you get some free time? You know sporadic updates, random, not all the time but sometimes?

5yr
Sorrias
SorriasLv5

A different history, I liked it ............................................ ...................................................................................

5yr
LifelessMan
LifelessManLv5

Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work

5yr
Anthony_Essex
Anthony_EssexLv5

I love this story MC is a spy from the red room and is basically a male Black widow I was sad when I first started reading this because the author said he was going to drop but to my suprise, he continued this great story. I really look forward to where this is going and I gave this 5 stars not just because it deserves it but to show the author how much I appreciate his work.

5yr
Rime
RimeLv3

Pretty good book that dives in the actual insides of SPY stuff. From the thinking to the approaches to certain situations. It’s fun, I’m sure you won’t regret trying it out.

5yr
Invertcolor
InvertcolorLv14

This story is pretty good but there are only so few chapters. So I will be watching and hoping the story goes in a great direction. 140 characters dhshehehudhshz

5yr
Travo
TravoAuthor

Author here... This book takes a lot of inspiration from the Boy Nobody series. Check it out. The spy stuff is all from there. The gas thing, basically every thing. Also, check out Hekate of Krypton if you have the time. The Guardian-1 I will have in future chapters is from that book.

5yr
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