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2019-07-14 11:27

This story is pretty good but there are only so few chapters. So I will be watching and hoping the story goes in a great direction. 140 characters dhshehehudhshz

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Thanks for the review, I hope you're still watching.

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Glasir
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Not bad. I guess. Writing Quality: [4/5] There isn't a lot of errors I can spot. There are a few but it isn't so bad that I couldn't read it. The scenes could be a lot more descriptive but the approach to the character is pretty good. Stability of Updates: [3/5] It's pretty stable on how many times it updates, but there was a 4-5 day wait where there weren't any chapters. Again, the author didn't give us a weekly plan or anything so I might be being a little harsh. Story Development: [5/5] It's really fast in the beginning, like the first 16 years, but it slowed down. A lot. There is two chapters of him talking to Agent Fury and Natasha. But I like it like that. It doesn't feel rushed. It might be slow, but it's always constant. Some parts are just a bit too short though. Like the action scenes with the guards. Character Design: [4/5] The character's not bad but I don't see him being very consistent. He's always changing. Maybe that's the point of being a spy though. Always changing your thoughts to react to different situations better. Think from different angles. World Background: [...] I don't really have anything to say about this one. It's the MCU world with a bit of changes. So far the MC hasn't been alone and explored the world so this might change in the future. The reason I put everything as 5 stars in the actual grading is because of some Jacka** who posted a one-star just by looking at 2 chapters. I'm trying to break even so...here I am. My real opinions are already said on the review though. All in all a 4.2 for me. But you should check it out yourself. See if you like it or not.

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