This is a world-building novel. This story requires a reader to build up concentration and imagine the scenes in their head. If one is just here for a quick read, very unlikely you would find this enjoyable. As a world-building writer myself. I enjoyed it. I think the grammars are alright to breeze through, I didn't think it affected the reading experience. This is a sexual/erotic content kind of novel. I don't mind it at all. :)
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