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Shinobu
ShinobuLv153yr
2021-07-01 09:05

πŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’ŠβŠ‚δΊŒδΊŒδΊŒοΌˆγ€€οΌΎΟ‰οΌΎοΌ‰δΊŒβŠƒ FANTASTIC Read! At ch 135 Atm and greatly anticipate new material! πŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’ŠπŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’ŠπŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’ŠπŸ’‰πŸ’Š βŠ‚δΊŒδΊŒδΊŒοΌˆγ€€οΌΎΟ‰οΌΎοΌ‰δΊŒβŠƒ

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Shiro_the_Hero
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I'm really, really happy that you've enjoyed my story so far! Thanks for the kind words, and for taking the time out of your day to leave a review :) More chapters, as always, are on their way o7

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CrimsonsSable
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The only reason Writing Quality is a 4 Star instead of 5 is because some things can get a bit long winded during explanations. Don't get me wrong on it however, I enjoy that but I know a lot of people who don't, to me it show you put thought into how you want things to be explained instead of just rushing through them. Everything else is 5 Stars due to you having a schedule and sticking to it unless something happens or like the anniversary where you released an extra chapter, the story development shows you've researched what you are writing about and try to get everything to roughly line up with the world the story takes place,even if the concept wasn't in the world to begin with. Character design is great, you have characters that have flaws and to me it makes them seem more authentic, you also have it so they work on them which is another great thing. World background as I said towards the top you research the world to make things seem more natural so that is a solid, and considering you want to quite possibly take this to other worlds as long as the same detail is put into each of them as the Danmachi world I will be extremely happy to continue reading this story. Overall the story is awesome, if time is needed to ensure that it continues to be as it is in coming chapters than by all means take however long you need, just let us know so we aren't stuck in limbo waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work and I hope you continue to have fun writing this story in the future.

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