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B0ssuLv23yr
2021-04-18 03:53

I'm really surprised this story this story isn't higher ranked. This story comes as a much welcome and much needed oasis amidst the sheer deluge of garbage that is almost all the Danmachi fics on this site. Writing quality is excellent. The author's command of English alone is enough to make this fic much better than the others here. The author also updates regularly. He aims to update twice a week (Sunday and Thursday). Although he sometimes doesn't follow this exact schedule, he's typically fastidious in following it. His updates are also sizable chapters, not short insubstantial snippets meant to keep the story bumped up. Story design is also excellent. I can't emphasize enough how nice it is to finally see a Danmachi fic without Bell or Hestia. The massive exposition dumps do slow down the pacing a bit, but those who don't want to get bogged down in the weeds can easily skip those bits. Character design is also solid. The MC doesn't seem to have schizophrenia and is pretty consistent throughout the story. He is a bit on the overpowered end, but that's part of the story's charm. There could be more of the supporting characters, but they generally come across as likable. The author has also gone all put on worldbuilding. There's a lot of the dungeon that canon didn't cover, and the author has put in Herculean effort to fill in the gaps as needed. Overall, I highly recommend checking out this story.

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Shiro_the_Hero
Shiro_the_HeroAuthor

Thanks for much for all the kind words! I'm *extremely* happy to hear that you enjoy my story so much and think this highly of it :) It feels great to hear you appreciate my effort, I won't lie TT v TT I'm aware that it's not a story that's for everyone, nor is it 100% free of any mistakes, but I'll do my best to keep up the quality! o7 (One thing that I want to point out: I aim for 1.5 chapters every week, not 2. Because there were some extra chapters that I posted around the time you first appeared in the comments, you might have gotten the wrong idea - just wanted to let you know! :D If it was truly 2 chapters every single week, I'd probably croak xD)

Soel_Eater
Soel_EaterLv4

very very good story I'll give you 5 Star ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ keep up the great work

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CrimsonsSable
CrimsonsSableLv14

The only reason Writing Quality is a 4 Star instead of 5 is because some things can get a bit long winded during explanations. Don't get me wrong on it however, I enjoy that but I know a lot of people who don't, to me it show you put thought into how you want things to be explained instead of just rushing through them. Everything else is 5 Stars due to you having a schedule and sticking to it unless something happens or like the anniversary where you released an extra chapter, the story development shows you've researched what you are writing about and try to get everything to roughly line up with the world the story takes place,even if the concept wasn't in the world to begin with. Character design is great, you have characters that have flaws and to me it makes them seem more authentic, you also have it so they work on them which is another great thing. World background as I said towards the top you research the world to make things seem more natural so that is a solid, and considering you want to quite possibly take this to other worlds as long as the same detail is put into each of them as the Danmachi world I will be extremely happy to continue reading this story. Overall the story is awesome, if time is needed to ensure that it continues to be as it is in coming chapters than by all means take however long you need, just let us know so we aren't stuck in limbo waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work and I hope you continue to have fun writing this story in the future.

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