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XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaLv155yr
2019-06-17 12:45

There is only two chapters out so far, so it's too soon to judge properly. But from what I've read so far.. •Captivating plotline, immediately drew me to the story from the very first chapter. It made me want to read more, so the opening is very good. The mysteries are laid out without much confusion, the incidence seven years ago - the interaction between the leads in the first chapter. I can't wait to find out more of the situation that lead to her leaving that cruel place. • The emotions of the female lead, this is very important. It's only two chapters in but I already feel bad for her and can sympathize with her situation, and I can feel her pain and anguish. The FL, just two chapters in but since the emotions are portrayed so well. I can already see this "independent" character, a story about a woman who through all her hardships and pain moved forward with her life 🤔🤔 my impression so far. (˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧ Good luck with your new novel Blips, I'll surely be supporting you with this

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TheBlips
TheBlipsAuthor

Thank you. <3

JeiJandee
JeiJandeeLv4

Hi, I noticed that you're good at giving constructive criticisms to novels you read. I am also an aspiring writer and your inputs will be highly appreciated. I wonder if you're okay with that. :)

Shirleey
ShirleeyLv13

Too long story is difficult to keep chasing 😊

Jabir_Hussain
Jabir_HussainLv1

jabir hussain

Jabir_Hussain
Jabir_HussainLv1

Mm

Shirleey:Too long story is difficult to keep chasing 😊
LuBi
LuBiLv12

👍👍

Brianne_Tippetts
Brianne_TippettsLv12

Great story!

Red_Burns
Red_BurnsLv4

👍🏻👍🏻

Willow_Blake
Willow_BlakeLv3

So true

lynrsdi
lynrsdiLv4

✊🏻

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