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2021-12-19 05:29

This is probably my first review of a fan fiction, and as of reading up to chapter 331, this is the best Harry Potter fanfiction that I've come across so far. Writing Quality - Other than slight(possible) mistakes on a few words here and there, there's not really a problem. there might be different words and phrases that could be changed for better understanding of what's currently going on at a given point in the story, but doesn't dampen the story in any way. Story Development - Absolutely perfect; this was done exceptionally well, from one arc of the story to the next. I could say that this was done so well that it doesn't really feel like a fan fiction in that regard. (keep up the good work author-chan😊) Character Design - This was done spectacularly; I love how Christina flows in the story so naturally, her interactions with known characters like Harry, Hermione, Ron, Luna, etc. and how she changes the story so dynamically while also still keeping the original plot together as the story continues from one book to another. Updating Stability - Fantastic, the author made a schedule and stuck to it to the best of her ability. (we all have things that need attention in our lives so we can't blame you author 👍) World Background - This definitely was done as good as the others if not done better. it's the feeling that I got when reading this that made me think; oh wow, this makes me feel like I'm actually reading a Harry Potter book and not a fan fiction.🤣 Overall, I'd give this book a solid 4.9 out of 5. while I can't say it's the best fan fiction out there that I've read, it's pretty d*mn close. And since I've read a couple fan fictions on Harry Potter, I know this definitely hits the nail right on the coffin. For some of you who are looking for a fan fiction of Harry Potter, those that want to start reading Harry Potter but didn't have the chance or time, or are looking for a interesting fan fiction; this is for you.

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