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chiridon22
chiridon22Lv35yr
2019-08-27 02:07

I thought I should write a review after I binge read it. I realy like hp fanfictions so I say what I what I find positiv. the story changes are alway very inovativ and lucien is an interisting charakter. The magic system also feel more whole since it isn`t only british magic. the background is well done and adds up for most parts. before I critisize I should say my english also is not good enought to write a book and I couldn`t have writen such a good book so you have my respect author. so now negative part about, you need too know all source material to realy get all charakter only the change of most charakter a noted and not the original. also all exept lucien often feel like puppet used for the store in a play but without emotions. also the author often missspells thinks or maybe just needs an editor. somen meaning I in a sentence. also the story lose its personality and the "grove". Still all in all its good for an for fanfiction and author still dint drop it

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Mephistophvera
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I haven't read the novel but your comment made my day. I almost fell of my chair when i read *the author often missspells*

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