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King_Frost
King_FrostLv125yr
2020-02-08 06:49

Writers said Mc wouldn't be OP at the beginning and it will take times like normal people.. It took less than 20 chapters. The MC is so annoying, the slang is horrible and the grammar is even worst. English is my second language and even I can't take it anymore. Author trade fast pace chapters for horrible grammar. It is a perfect example of quantity instead of quality. Characters are making weird choices and Mc is just a ruthless *****, not thinking about the repercussion of his action (not that it matters because yeah..plot armor and stuff). All in all it is just a teenager on a Power trip making the world his *****. I feel no attachment for him. I feel like the author should just stop for a while. Go back to the beginning, proofread his work and refine his story. It is not all bad but the bad outweigh the good by a mile.

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