Item: Harry Potter and The Loa's Child
Rating: 4
Author: MilkGod

MilkGodLv115yr

2019-06-24 21:16

Grammar is ok but there are some fück ups, story is about loa and voodoo stuff. (I have no idea what this stuff is) Although I do not know much about these things I'm learning about it. This is my 3rd favourite Harry Potter Fan-Fiction. Over all good story with a dash of Voodoo things.

Harry Potter and The Loa's Child

Grand_Magus

4.4

130 Chs

Liked by 11 people

Replies9

Jackp3Lv14

Can u tell me the other two if they r as good as this?

4yr

GrapejuiceLv14

Ok my friend, THE LOA are deities, and they can either be Animals or Humanoids, they are also fvckin big.

4yr

Tyrant_BearLv3

Exp

4yr

John_JigglerLv2

if you are looking for good hp fanfics you can try. For the love of magic savior of magic rise of wizards Honor thy blood muggleborn conspiracy Harry Potter and the house of falken

Jackp3:Can u tell me the other two if they r as good as this?

4yr

Jackp3Lv14

thx

John_Jiggler:if you are looking for good hp fanfics you can try. For the love of magic savior of magic rise of wizards Honor thy blood muggleborn conspiracy Harry Potter and the house of falken

4yr

John_JigglerLv2

can you suggest some good fanfiction for me

Jackp3:thx

4yr

Jackp3Lv14

Depend on what u like? Professor Dovahkiin The life of Tiberius Dragonborn saga the wound in the stars apocalypse: copy master Marvel's mutant gamer Playing one piece Resident Evil multiverse of madness

John_Jiggler:can you suggest some good fanfiction for me

4yr

John_JigglerLv2

I really liked Marvel's mutant Gamer

Jackp3:Depend on what u like? Professor Dovahkiin The life of Tiberius Dragonborn saga the wound in the stars apocalypse: copy master Marvel's mutant gamer Playing one piece Resident Evil multiverse of madness

4yr

Daoist2MagJ2Lv14

thanks

John_Jiggler:if you are looking for good hp fanfics you can try. For the love of magic savior of magic rise of wizards Honor thy blood muggleborn conspiracy Harry Potter and the house of falken

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