I only see a few mistakes in the writing quality, but its fine overall. It seems to be that you update a few chapters every time instead of a stable amount each day, which might not be something readers look forward to. But great job and good luck!
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LIKEThank you for your review. π About the update, It's true that at the beginning, I did not have a definite schedule of posting or a definite number of chapters to be posted each day. I was just testing the waters since it's my first time here in Webnovel. However, on May 31 , when I posted Chapters 9 and 10, I announced that I will be posting 2 chapters per day and 5 chapters during Saturdays and that will be the schedule that I'll be following until the end of the novel. Thanks.
Thank you for your review. π About the update, It's true that at the beginning, I did not have a definite schedule of posting or a definite number of chapters to be posted each day. I was just testing the waters since it's my first time here in Webnovel. However, on May 31 , when I posted Chapters 9 and 10, I announced that I will be posting 2 chapters per day and 5 chapters during Saturdays and that will be the schedule that I'll be following until the end of the novel. Thanks.