Review Detail of Aeternabilis in Food Wars: The Golden Hands
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Story was set up well and had good potential but ruined it from the start. The first chapter just wasn't good.. you used excuses on why you don't want him to go to the school, tired soul etc. Enough of that you just want him to follow soma, the only reason why you introduced the girls is bc of love in the future for your crappy harem. Got to the next chapter and as soon as I got past four lines I just cringed... meeting your father etc just crap you can tell where it's going and it's just sht tbh. Make it your own... stop using the mc's of food wars for every fkin character introduced. Think if he was born in an orphanage would have been more interesting or maybe different country. Just somewhere you could have set a good foundation and not ruin your own story. bye
Food Wars: The Golden Hands
Doragon
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Well, it's your opinion and how you took it. But I only have one comment about the Tired soul thing you mentioned. Don't misunderstood that, it's not because his soul is tired from reincarnation or anything. Its the feeling of him being inside the life of chefs and cooking for a long time and that feeling followed him even after his reincarnation. So he wanted to stay away from the life of chef as long as he could. Bye.
