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simplevoid
simplevoidLv55yr
2019-10-02 13:29

This story is okay. Grammar is better than most other fanfics out. But it could be better when it comes to pacing and description. Author has a tendency to get lost when writing which could be prevented slowing down when writing or rereading what he just wrote. Also since this is a food novel being more descriptive when mc is cooking or others are trying his food would help improve quality of the story. Overall okay but has room for improvement

Food Wars: The Golden Hands

Doragon
4.6
247 Chs

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Wallabalooza
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Meh. Writer who asks for money every chapter, but can't be bothered to even look over and edit his own work for mistakes. Why anyone would support such a lazy person, I really don't know. Mediocre story, full of forced plot and unrealistic behavior. If you tried harder, you could probably do decently enough, but this is not it.

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Pvdro
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Fastia
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Itโ€™s okay. Stared off good but it started to slow down. The cooking feels a bit bland and repetitive. While still a good read if your bored not a book I would recommend to buy.

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pan39
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Nyaannii
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Second SnS I read, It is good the MC a chef among chefs died then reincarnated to a special mother meeting new people, he realized he wants to lay back on this life when the plot begins and so the story begun too. When cooking half-assed it said his skills rival of joichiro and other top chefs, hmm seems If someone makes him serious, pretty sure the client will experience not food s*x anymore but f*cking drugs. So Itโ€™s safe if he keeps his half-assed cookings, donโ€™t want people kidnapping you and make you food until you die.

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