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Ascathon_Asceron
Ascathon_AsceronLv124yr
2020-07-25 14:35

Spoiler alert MC got NTR'd in the 11th chapter. If that is what you want then continue. I'm only willing to continue to read because im not the type of person to drop something on just measly few chapters. But that NTR really hit me hard.

Nova Roma

KENTARO12100
3.8
382 Chs

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Tyyx
TyyxLv1

Thank you very much, I really appreciate it. You saved me from the bad taste in my mouth.

4yr
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radude4411
radude4411Lv15

What is NTR?

4yr
Doruk_C
Doruk_CLv14

Ohhh boyyy

radude4411:What is NTR?
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KENTARO12100
KENTARO12100Author

Guys I'm the author leaving a message, I'm just a guy trying to bring all of you a work of quality but I'm alone, if you want to help you can join in the discord server the link are in the description of the novel, I will get grammatically premium for correct the mess of the first chapters and you can have a better reading, if you want to help or comments something you can leave a message in discord, I'm and author who likes to read the readers critics and recommendation. Anyway ty for all you who keeps reading the novel, I will correct the mess of the first 50 chapters, just givme time, remember the link in discord are in description, all the news or notice you can read there ;)

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TurtleAudience
TurtleAudienceLv4

Author, don't feel down trodden your work isn't perfect but then again no book is perfect. Not everyone will like your story-telling but that doesn't mean you have to change your story to fit their exact desires. Create the story you like, obviously improve on some logistical points like timeline, history reference accuracy, mythology accuracy and grammar. I saw many comments disdaining the usage of hypnosis for kingdom building, personally it doesn't matter as long as it matches the MC's personality. It does seem a little rushed however. Damn this was a long comment, keep up the good work!

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LiNa_Author
LiNa_AuthorLv3

Read 53 chapters. ------ WOW! This whole thing of "Roman reincarnation" is amazing. I loved the concept... much much different than other books here on webnovel. I think..if you could hire an editor, this book can reach the tops. There are a few errors that need to be corrected, but they won't distract you much from enjoying the book. I am waiting for more chapters. Look forward to reading more! Keep it up!

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Dis77
Dis77Lv11

Its a great novel but its lacks any real character. It's always the MC does this or that and no real feeling by any people in the story that makes you feel what kind of person they are. I've only read up to the fiance part and I can say there is nothing for me to root for. Even the MC power makes things convenient and has everyone behaving like zombies without any free will of themselves. What kind of enjoyment is it to read when everyone doesn't have a mind of their own aside from the bland MC. Another issue is the grammar and spelling issues. The author is in dire need of an editor. That all said I love the concept but I don't find myself wanting to read another chapter with no personality to speak of within the novel.

5yr
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

Crap novel. Firstly it is hard to read it. I have to pretty much fix every sentence in my mind for the story to make sense. Secondly, there are lots of stupid things happening in the story, for example mc sees some girl and falls in love with her straight away even though she is just nobody. Also, she is raped so mc marries some nobody abused rape victim?? Yeah very fun for us readers. I don't read stories for such sh*t!

4yr
1996611q
1996611qLv12

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Vrinda13
Vrinda13Lv5

I really like the concept behind this book which is different from other books. The only complaint I had while reading this book was lagging grammer and sentence formation. Many times it was hard for me to understand the meaning behind the sentences. You have also done silly grammatical mistakes like you haven't used full stop (.) in the end of sentences. At some places you have used I instead of he, His instead of her. Please focus on such mistakes. Your book has potential but no reader will stick to your book for longer if he keeps finding such mistakes again and again.

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DropTheMic
DropTheMicLv14

People who like this must have be braindead. I can't fathom how people can like this **** ..........................................****tttttttt

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Eternal2145
Eternal2145Lv14

It starts off with ok grammer and a ok story but then it goes down hill fast. The mc is reincarnated but he acts childish, any problem he faces he hypnotizes people. The grammer gets so bad i don't know what is going on in certain parts of the story. Also it uses greek terminology which is find but its never explained what the words mean, so its gibberish mixed in with ****ty grammer. 😠

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