A well-deserved five star. It is rare to encounter a good story paired with a great writing style. Few sentences in and I am completely immersed. The author has the ability to convey the happenings in such an intricate manner. The descriptive elements are never-lacking as the readers delve in to the world. It is definitely a type of story that I would read. I see no errors in the grammar. The pacing is good as well. Keep up the good work.

If words can create worlds, this is a perfect example of how such an accomplishment can be achievable. In a single sentence, there is more detail present than what I could write in a single paragraph. It is evident that there is much more than just a brief journey being told, as the layers of detail that keeps you constantly thinking and on the edge of your seat, will forever be engrained in your mind.

Okay, I like this one very much. It’s well-written but doesn’t rely an any of the popular thropes that have taken over webnovel. Nit that there’s something wrong with liking popular thropes but personally I’ve grown tired of it and reading this really set a new standard for me. Keep it up Author.

Love it! I myself love reading anything descriptive and this is really good! The plots amd developments are amazing, but I think you could stretch it more😂 Overall its good! Good job Author!

This story feels more on the historic side if I'm not wrong. I love the way how the author tells us the story, almost as if we are watching a movie in our imaginative head. There were some grammar mistakes here and there, but not everyone is perfect, so that is fine. I can't give an accurate description of the world background since this story is still in it's beginning stages. However, this story is a good read and I will definitely add this to my library.

Your story is good and interesting. I enjoy the way it is written, it really tells a story. It is like picking up a bio or history book and learning about someone. Your grammar is good, although there are tiny mistakes but they are not that noticeable nor take from the story. Keep up the good work!

Very well, I haven't read it all, and I'm writting this as to take a little break before I keep going. And so far the only thing I have to say is the following "Incredible", from the first chapter this sucks you in, the world, the characters and the incredable writting is just the cherry on top. Honestly, after I'm finished here, I will go straight back to reading!

The author done a very good job in describing the scenarios, which made it easy for me to imagine myself in the mc shoes. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my Interest. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his hardwork and please do continue to deliver such good works😊😊😊😊

Well these chapters so far were both a bit of a torment and a pleasure. I honestly did not expect any author on webnovel to have me Google terms like sangfroid... The language and terms fits the time of snobbish upper middle class so it fits. The world background is what it is early 20th century Paris so no need to dwell on that. I could see some mistakes but they were minor and I put comments on the paragraphs where I was at least 90% sure the author did not use that word on purpose. Anyway, it is different from anything I read on webnovel before and I wish the author can get the audience it deserves.

I've never really been a fan of history but you made it interesting. The way you wrote the book is very clean and professional. I llike it ❤👍