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KageMugen
KageMugenLv144yr
2020-05-22 03:59

Well these chapters so far were both a bit of a torment and a pleasure. I honestly did not expect any author on webnovel to have me Google terms like sangfroid... The language and terms fits the time of snobbish upper middle class so it fits. The world background is what it is early 20th century Paris so no need to dwell on that. I could see some mistakes but they were minor and I put comments on the paragraphs where I was at least 90% sure the author did not use that word on purpose. Anyway, it is different from anything I read on webnovel before and I wish the author can get the audience it deserves.

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Sigheti
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Thank you very much for your feedback. I truly appreciate the time and energy you have put into reading and correcting my work.

KageMugen
KageMugenLv14

Well, now you have to torment yourself with one of mine. As I said I did find your vocabulary astounding especially since you did write in the synopsis that you are doing this to better your English. I consider my vocabulary pretty good for a non-native speaker but I had to check at least 10 words in those chapters. Words like hansom... not much use for a carriage now... but still. Regards from Slovenia

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